Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Daybreak Quadro

A new day’s dawning
Sun raises up her sleepy head
Warms me with her smile
I leap out of bed still yawning

Quadro Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Checked with how many syllables

01~12~17

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2017 at 7:16 PM Very nice, Jan. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann Jan Allison January 19, 2017 at 10:42 AM Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith January 16, 2017 at 5:20 PM I cant remember the last time I leapt out of bed Jan Allison January 16, 2017 at 5:21 PM Oh I do every morning and moan I ache with my osteo arthritisin my shoulder lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak January 16, 2017 at 5:12 PM I love it!! What else is there to say, other than BIG CONGRATS! Jan Allison January 16, 2017 at 5:15 PM :-):-)awww thanks I do write the odd serious poem in among my humourous ones :-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White January 16, 2017 at 1:32 PM Coming back with congratulations. See? You are better at this than you often think :) Jan Allison January 16, 2017 at 1:34 PM Thanks for the vote of confidence I need to believe in myself a little more that I am not just a humourous poet and I can write the odd decent poem:-) hugs jan xx

Afzal Nusker January 15, 2017 at 9:53 PM It's so beautiful, Jan. Congratulations! Jan Allison January 16, 2017 at 4:40 AM Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton January 15, 2017 at 4:34 PM Congrats Jan nice win! Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:16 PM Thanks so much John:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2017 at 3:38 PM I remember how well I liked this the first time. BIG congrats on your super win. Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:15 PM I'm pleased to be on the list Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi January 15, 2017 at 1:32 PM I Kept seeing sunset here. I wonder if it was left open to your mental outlook. I'm glad your sun is dawning. Congrats. Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:14 PM I think the picture is open to interpretation it would be interesting to know the title of the picture of there is one:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Martin January 15, 2017 at 1:16 PM Great thing about an east facing bedroom window - the sun helps you wake up. Congratulations on your win! :-) Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:13 PM Thanks for drooping by Mark:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May January 15, 2017 at 1:11 PM Dropping back with my congrats Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:13 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 15, 2017 at 12:14 PM Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Jan...Well done!! Hugs // paul Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:12 PM Thanks Paul I was delighted to be on the list:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2017 at 11:52 AM ohh, , your mood, lines created quite a mellow emotion in me, jan... big congrats on your fine spot and thanks for taking time to join!..huggs Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:11 PM Thanks for a great contest Nette I loved the picture prompt:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe January 15, 2017 at 11:28 AM Like your images, Jan - I never thought of the sun as raising her sleepy head, lovely. Congrats on your win. This contest filled up so fast, I did not get a chance to write one. Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 5:11 PM It was a lovely picture prompt Agnes I'm not surprised the contest filled so quickly:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish January 14, 2017 at 10:52 PM You really scored with this unique form! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 3:50 AM Thanks Matthew I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet January 14, 2017 at 3:49 PM Nice poem...so easy to imagine and relate to. Carole Duet Jan Allison January 14, 2017 at 4:20 PM Thanks Carole:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 14, 2017 at 7:45 AM Your poem goes perfectly well with this prompt picture, Jan. It's lovely being greeted by the warm sun first thing in the morning! Hugs // paul Jan Allison January 14, 2017 at 4:20 PM It is a wonderful sight to see the sun - I'll be grateful when we get the lighter mornings and spring is on its way:-) hugs Jan xx

Claudia Polydoro January 13, 2017 at 10:42 PM Ohhh I love it Jan... Good luck on the contest <3 Jan Allison January 14, 2017 at 5:43 AM Thanks Claudia:-) hope you have a lovely weekend:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May January 13, 2017 at 2:03 PM "Warms me with her smile"...love that line...Nicely penned Jan Jan Allison January 13, 2017 at 2:11 PM Thanks Joseph I've read some wonderful poems Nette is going to have a tough job judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance January 13, 2017 at 9:13 AM Good poem good morning. ;) hugsx Jan Allison January 13, 2017 at 11:23 AM Thanks Cas:-) hope all is well with you all:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White January 13, 2017 at 1:05 AM Lol, you guys always make me smile, everyone always thinks the other one is better :) I love this Jan, it's gorgeous! Jan Allison January 13, 2017 at 11:27 AM Hey I know my poems are poopy Darren and make no secret that I write for fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2017 at 8:33 PM gosh, Jan. I hope I have time for this one. DANG. it fills so fast! I first have to catch up with SOUP. You did really well with this , my friend. I have not read any really yet but I think this is about as good as it gets. Jan Allison January 13, 2017 at 11:27 AM Thanks Andrea I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 12, 2017 at 6:21 PM You made me smile with this sweet and peppy poem. Good luck in the contest. (I'm yawning, now. LOL sleepy time here.) :) Dane Ann Jan Allison January 12, 2017 at 6:24 PM Sleep time here for me too Dane Ann:-) sweet dreams:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer January 12, 2017 at 5:56 PM nice one, jan! good luck in the contest... Jan Allison January 12, 2017 at 6:00 PM Thanks Ilene I hope Nette likes it - have posted a limerick earleir today if you're up for a giggle lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green January 12, 2017 at 3:32 PM Simply beautiful and perfectly written to the graphic Jan. Well, there goes my chances of winning. :) Really nice my friend, this looks like a winner to me. Jan Allison January 12, 2017 at 3:34 PM I really enjoyed the challenge Chris ... I think yours will place higher than mine!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. January 12, 2017 at 3:11 PM Hi Jan, Great take on the contest theme. Your poem goes well with the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest;-) Alexis Jan Allison January 12, 2017 at 3:12 PM Thanks Alexis:-) Nette has found a lovely picture to inspire us th contest is filling very quickly!:-) hugs Jan xx