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A new day’s dawning Sun raises up her sleepy head Warms me with her smile I leap out of bed still yawning Quadro Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Checked with how many syllables 01~12~17

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/17/2017 7:16:00 PM

Very nice, Jan. Congratulations on your win with this fine Quadro. Hugs, Dane Ann

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/16/2017 5:20:00 PM

I cant remember the last time I leapt out of bed

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 5:21:00 PM

Oh I do every morning and moan I ache with my osteo arthritisin my shoulder lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/16/2017 5:12:00 PM

I love it!! What else is there to say, other than BIG CONGRATS!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 5:15:00 PM

:-):-)awww thanks I do write the odd serious poem in among my humourous ones :-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 1/16/2017 1:32:00 PM

Coming back with congratulations. See? You are better at this than you often think :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 1:34:00 PM

Thanks for the vote of confidence I need to believe in myself a little more that I am not just a humourous poet and I can write the odd decent poem:-) hugs jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/15/2017 10:48:00 PM

Congrats and hugs Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 4:40:00 AM

Thanks Rob:-) Happy New year:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/15/2017 9:53:00 PM

It's so beautiful, Jan. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 4:40:00 AM

Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 1/15/2017 4:34:00 PM

Congrats Jan nice win!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:16:00 PM

Thanks so much John:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2017 3:38:00 PM

I remember how well I liked this the first time. BIG congrats on your super win.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:15:00 PM

I'm pleased to be on the list Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 1/15/2017 1:32:00 PM

I Kept seeing sunset here. I wonder if it was left open to your mental outlook. I'm glad your sun is dawning. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:14:00 PM

I think the picture is open to interpretation it would be interesting to know the title of the picture of there is one:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Martin

Date: 1/15/2017 1:16:00 PM

Great thing about an east facing bedroom window - the sun helps you wake up. Congratulations on your win! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thanks for drooping by Mark:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2017 1:11:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/15/2017 12:14:00 PM

Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Jan...Well done!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:12:00 PM

Thanks Paul I was delighted to be on the list:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2017 11:52:00 AM

ohh, , your mood, lines created quite a mellow emotion in me, jan... big congrats on your fine spot and thanks for taking time to join!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thanks for a great contest Nette I loved the picture prompt:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/15/2017 11:28:00 AM

Like your images, Jan - I never thought of the sun as raising her sleepy head, lovely. Congrats on your win. This contest filled up so fast, I did not get a chance to write one.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 5:11:00 PM

It was a lovely picture prompt Agnes I'm not surprised the contest filled so quickly:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/14/2017 10:52:00 PM

You really scored with this unique form! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2017 3:50:00 AM

Thanks Matthew I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

Date: 1/14/2017 3:49:00 PM

Nice poem...so easy to imagine and relate to. Carole Duet

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Carole:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/14/2017 7:45:00 AM

Your poem goes perfectly well with this prompt picture, Jan. It's lovely being greeted by the warm sun first thing in the morning! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2017 4:20:00 PM

It is a wonderful sight to see the sun - I'll be grateful when we get the lighter mornings and spring is on its way:-) hugs Jan xx

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/13/2017 10:42:00 PM

Ohhh I love it Jan... Good luck on the contest <3

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2017 5:43:00 AM

Thanks Claudia:-) hope you have a lovely weekend:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/13/2017 2:03:00 PM

"Warms me with her smile"...love that line...Nicely penned Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thanks Joseph I've read some wonderful poems Nette is going to have a tough job judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2017 9:13:00 AM

Good poem good morning. ;) hugsx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2017 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Cas:-) hope all is well with you all:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 1/13/2017 1:05:00 AM

Lol, you guys always make me smile, everyone always thinks the other one is better :) I love this Jan, it's gorgeous!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2017 11:27:00 AM

Hey I know my poems are poopy Darren and make no secret that I write for fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2017 8:33:00 PM

gosh, Jan. I hope I have time for this one. DANG. it fills so fast! I first have to catch up with SOUP. You did really well with this , my friend. I have not read any really yet but I think this is about as good as it gets.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2017 11:27:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/12/2017 6:21:00 PM

You made me smile with this sweet and peppy poem. Good luck in the contest. (I'm yawning, now. LOL sleepy time here.) :) Dane Ann

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2017 6:24:00 PM

Sleep time here for me too Dane Ann:-) sweet dreams:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/12/2017 5:56:00 PM

nice one, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2017 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I hope Nette likes it - have posted a limerick earleir today if you're up for a giggle lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 1/12/2017 3:32:00 PM

Simply beautiful and perfectly written to the graphic Jan. Well, there goes my chances of winning. :) Really nice my friend, this looks like a winner to me.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2017 3:34:00 PM

I really enjoyed the challenge Chris ... I think yours will place higher than mine!:-) hugs Jan xx