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Daybreak: Observed From An Airline Window

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The sky shone gaunt gold on the lip of the storm before the anvil shaped clouds advanced upon the burning margins of the world Like a dream the thunder rolled away leaving cotton candy swirls before a spreading dawn Gentle white horse clouds appeared pulling pastel chariots bearing angels - rainbows, tinted on their snowy wings Down they plunged gilt-edged, into a pit of pure white popcorn clouds Feeling God-like before the breakfast service I watched delicate washes of pale lavender mist into daylight. Dedicated to Connie Marcum Wong who worked as a flight attendant for many years. LATE JULY 2018 STANDARD,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines Contest Judged: 7/23/2018 10:59:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 5/31/2021 7:08:00 AM
What a most delightful poem. Love your whimsical descriptions of clouds ~
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Date: 6/11/2019 9:02:00 PM
Spectacular, sublime images. So moving, original, and beautiful.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/12/2019 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your friendship. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 7/24/2018 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery. Enjoyed!
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Date: 2/24/2016 10:08:00 PM
Astounding images abound, with many stories to tell. The first time I went flying, I was mesmerized by what I saw when I flew above the clouds. I imagined kids having a colossal snowball fight, the clouds were so much like snow. It sparks the imagination. Creatively penned, Suz.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/25/2016 11:13:00 PM
Hi Timothy: I almost a always write a poem on a flight and on the longer flights that go from night to day it is always inspiring to be up there, as the sky transforms to light again. Thanks for reading and commenting. SuZ
Date: 12/6/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hi Suzanne: I's amazing how many poems can be evoked by gazing out of any windows and you have done it so well! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:51:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Suzannne, nice write.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks James: I appreciate you taking time to read and comments. Cheers, SuZ
Date: 12/4/2015 11:47:00 PM
Suzanne, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat: Your'e so kind in your support of me and many others. We appreciate you. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 12/4/2015 11:30:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win Suzanne... big congrats!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2015 11:56:00 AM
Many Thanks Dr, Upma: I appreciate your visits, Always, SuZ
Date: 12/4/2015 11:04:00 PM
Hi Suz,, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/5/2015 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Linda: You always come up with the best ideas and themes for your Contests. I appreciate this win. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 11/21/2015 5:28:00 PM
This is excellent, Suzanne! Heavenly captivating imagery. What an advert for air travel:) #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:31:00 PM
WOW the imagery is sublime Suzanne - makes me want to get on a plane NOW:-) hugs jan xx7
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