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Daybreak In Peach

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lush
              daybreak
                   spreads
                          rhinestone
                              like tincture
                      of flame,
                             to
                                wildly
                                  unravel
                                      a coral-gold
                                            horizon...
                                    till sun
                                       bursts
                                              on fields
                                                 cradling morn
                                                   with rays...
                                                        warm
                                                     as peach        
                                                 glow.       
                                                   



                                   Brian Strand's May 2018 Premiere Contest

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/23/2015 11:00:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulation on your. awesome win........A.M

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2015 11:54:00 PM

NETTE, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2015 4:36:00 PM

The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2015 3:30:00 PM

I just knew this would do well. BIG congrats to you!

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 3:22:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/19/2015 10:14:00 AM

Breath-taking !! A sure winner......I would totally agree !! :) Congratulations !

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2015 5:04:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2015 1:23:00 AM

Beautiful write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Lee Carter

Date: 7/18/2015 11:15:00 PM

So pretty! Congrats

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/18/2015 10:42:00 PM

Nette, I love the color you chose. This is a beautiful waltz wave that flows smoothly like a waltz! Congrats on your 1st place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2015 2:15:00 PM

A nice soft, fuzzy good morning. Makes me want to put a little honey in my coffee. Love, daver

Thomas Martin

Date: 7/11/2015 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful waltz with outstanding imagery! And thanks for visiting my poems

Judy Konos

Date: 7/11/2015 8:15:00 AM

Very lovely waltz and I especially enjoyed your layout...very talented indeed....

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/11/2015 6:33:00 AM

It really does dance! Mesmerizing with all kinds of shades of peach, Nette. Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2015 5:26:00 AM

- A pretty picture in color and words, dear Nette :) - Good luck in the contest and I wish you a lovely weekend - How is the storm? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/10/2015 11:26:00 PM

Very nice picture of dawn, My name is Matthew - you referred to me as Robert in your comment. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2015 11:11:00 PM

wow, one of the most amazing ones I have seen. Your formatting rocks!!