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lush daybreak spreads rhinestone like tincture of flame, to wildly unravel a coral-gold horizon... till sun bursts on fields cradling morn with rays... warm as peach glow. Brian Strand's May 2018 Premiere Contest

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Date: 7/23/2015 11:00:00 AM
A wonderful write, congratulation on your. awesome win........A.M
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:54:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:36:00 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
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Date: 7/20/2015 3:30:00 PM
I just knew this would do well. BIG congrats to you!
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:22:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 10:14:00 AM
Breath-taking !! A sure winner......I would totally agree !! :) Congratulations !
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:04:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:23:00 AM
Beautiful write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:15:00 PM
So pretty! Congrats
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Date: 7/18/2015 10:42:00 PM
Nette, I love the color you chose. This is a beautiful waltz wave that flows smoothly like a waltz! Congrats on your 1st place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/11/2015 2:15:00 PM
A nice soft, fuzzy good morning. Makes me want to put a little honey in my coffee. Love, daver
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Date: 7/11/2015 12:26:00 PM
Beautiful waltz with outstanding imagery! And thanks for visiting my poems
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Date: 7/11/2015 8:15:00 AM
Very lovely waltz and I especially enjoyed your layout...very talented indeed....
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Date: 7/11/2015 6:33:00 AM
It really does dance! Mesmerizing with all kinds of shades of peach, Nette. Lovely!
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Date: 7/11/2015 5:26:00 AM
- A pretty picture in color and words, dear Nette :) - Good luck in the contest and I wish you a lovely weekend - How is the storm? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2015 11:26:00 PM
Very nice picture of dawn, My name is Matthew - you referred to me as Robert in your comment. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/10/2015 11:11:00 PM
wow, one of the most amazing ones I have seen. Your formatting rocks!!
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Date: 7/10/2015 5:51:00 PM
My favorite color nette....there is a glow to this piece...good luck Tim
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Date: 7/10/2015 5:08:00 PM
You never run out of alluring poems like this burst of morning glow!
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Date: 7/10/2015 4:07:00 PM
A visual delight Nette. This is sure to place high!
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Date: 7/10/2015 3:57:00 PM
Impressive verse! Full of very beautiful and enchanting lines - Nicely done, Nette! All the very best!! :) john P.s A Seven!
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Date: 7/10/2015 3:53:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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