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Daybreak In Peach

lush
              daybreak
                   spreads
                          rhinestone
                              like tincture
                      of flame,
                             to
                                wildly
                                  unravel
                                      a coral-gold
                                            horizon...
                                    till sun
                                       bursts
                                              on fields
                                                 cradling morn
                                                   with rays...
                                                        warm
                                                     as peach        
                                                 glow.       
                                                   



                                   Brian Strand's May 2018 Premiere Contest

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Afolabi Muideen July 23, 2015 at 11:00 AM A wonderful write, congratulation on your. awesome win........A.M

Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2015 at 11:54 PM NETTE, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2015 at 4:36 PM The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2015 at 3:30 PM I just knew this would do well. BIG congrats to you!

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 3:22 PM Nette, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Carrie Richards July 19, 2015 at 10:14 AM Breath-taking !! A sure winner......I would totally agree !! :) Congratulations !

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 5:04 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper July 19, 2015 at 1:23 AM Beautiful write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Lee Carter July 18, 2015 at 11:15 PM So pretty! Congrats

Kim Merryman July 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM Nette, I love the color you chose. This is a beautiful waltz wave that flows smoothly like a waltz! Congrats on your 1st place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Daver Austin July 11, 2015 at 2:15 PM A nice soft, fuzzy good morning. Makes me want to put a little honey in my coffee. Love, daver

Thomas Martin July 11, 2015 at 12:26 PM Beautiful waltz with outstanding imagery! And thanks for visiting my poems

Judy Konos July 11, 2015 at 8:15 AM Very lovely waltz and I especially enjoyed your layout...very talented indeed....

Kp Nunez July 11, 2015 at 6:33 AM It really does dance! Mesmerizing with all kinds of shades of peach, Nette. Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2015 at 5:26 AM - A pretty picture in color and words, dear Nette :) - Good luck in the contest and I wish you a lovely weekend - How is the storm? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish July 10, 2015 at 11:26 PM Very nice picture of dawn, My name is Matthew - you referred to me as Robert in your comment. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2015 at 11:11 PM wow, one of the most amazing ones I have seen. Your formatting rocks!!

Tim Smith July 10, 2015 at 5:51 PM My favorite color nette....there is a glow to this piece...good luck Tim

Gabby Sabre July 10, 2015 at 5:08 PM You never run out of alluring poems like this burst of morning glow!

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2015 at 4:07 PM A visual delight Nette. This is sure to place high!

John Fleming July 10, 2015 at 3:57 PM Impressive verse! Full of very beautiful and enchanting lines - Nicely done, Nette! All the very best!! :) john P.s A Seven!

Jan Allison July 10, 2015 at 3:53 PM absolutely beautiful Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx