Paulette Calasibetta Poet Rhyme

Daybreak

The morning star fades from the depths of night;

                             Shadowed hills, cloaked with bony leafless trees,

                                    The horizon breaks into tinted light,

                                Clouds forming aloft, drifting on the breeze,

                                  In the east the sun prepares to ignite,

                                   Without exception, a diurnal flight.




January 28, 2017
Submission for Contest: A Rhyme in 60
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Barry Stebbings February 3, 2017 at 1:21 PM Lovely depiction of dawn, Paulette, congratulations on your win. I also very much like your first poem, 'First Snow'. // Barry

David Bose February 3, 2017 at 9:41 AM I love your precise imagery. You've captured dawn handily, and in a really fun format. Nice job, thanks, Dave Paulette Calasibetta February 3, 2017 at 12:12 PM Thanks Dave!

Teddy Kimathi February 3, 2017 at 1:23 AM Brilliant piece!!! Congrats Paulette, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Paulette Calasibetta February 3, 2017 at 7:24 AM Hi Teddy, Thanks!!!

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 7:08 PM One of the best on the list, Paulette. Truly! Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:27 PM Hi Andrea, Thank you!

James Inman February 2, 2017 at 9:58 AM A wonderfully descriptive write Paulette. I've been watching dawn arrive almost every day for the last three weeks over a small lake where I work. When the warmth of the sun hits the water it creates beautiful eddies over the water like tiny slow moving tornadoes. Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:28 PM Thank you James....and certainly what a lovely place to work, where you can witness the glory that morning brings!

Sushma A. Singh February 1, 2017 at 11:38 PM Congrats! Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:28 PM Thank You....

Sandra Haight February 1, 2017 at 7:27 PM Such lovely imagery presented in your poem, Paulette. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:29 PM Hi Sandra, Thank you!

Deborah Burch February 1, 2017 at 12:41 PM Congratulations Paulette!! Well done! Big Hugggs!! Deb Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 3:30 PM Hi Deb, Thank you....It was a joy to write!

Frederic Parker January 29, 2017 at 6:38 PM A well rendered poem that creates a perfect image...good luck in the contest Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:30 PM Hi Frederic, Thank you....

Darren White January 29, 2017 at 12:55 PM This is beautiful! It's like a perfectly painted little picture :) Paulette Calasibetta January 29, 2017 at 2:58 PM Hi Darren, Thank you, that is a real compliment as I strive to paint a vivd picture with words. Again, Thanks !

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 6:48 PM this is wonderfully crafted, Paulette. GREAT job! So pretty.