Daybreak

Daybreak after the dawn breaks forests filled with day critters loudly chatter plans diverse species chat an hour head east and enjoy freedom Sunshine Williams P.S I love my backyard

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/11/2016 12:03:00 PM

Beautiful pen Jill!very nicely painted piece in this Tanka.A 7!Wishing you and yours, a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016! Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/3/2016 3:35:00 PM

Dorian, thank you sooo much for your sweet praise and well wishes...peace & love, :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2016 5:31:00 PM

Hey, thanks for saying I had some Hippy in me. I usually don't!! ok, reading this one now. this is really cute, and now I see you were inspired by your backyard. That sounds like a GREAT place to sit at dawn!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/5/2016 5:05:00 PM

It truly is Andrea! Free your hidden hippy...:), jill