Jill Spagnola Poet Tanka

Daybreak

Daybreak

                               after the dawn breaks
                          forests filled with day critters
                               loudly chatter plans
                           diverse species chat an hour
                           head east and enjoy freedom


					                           Sunshine Williams



P.S  I love my backyard

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Dorian Petersen Potter January 11, 2016 at 12:03 PM Beautiful pen Jill!very nicely painted piece in this Tanka.A 7!Wishing you and yours, a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016! Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D. Jill Spagnola February 3, 2016 at 3:35 PM Dorian, thank you sooo much for your sweet praise and well wishes...peace & love, :), jill

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2016 at 5:31 PM Hey, thanks for saying I had some Hippy in me. I usually don't!! ok, reading this one now. this is really cute, and now I see you were inspired by your backyard. That sounds like a GREAT place to sit at dawn! Jill Spagnola January 5, 2016 at 5:05 PM It truly is Andrea! Free your hidden hippy...:), jill