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Contest Illumination – Steven Henderson

submitted to Lanterne Frenzy Contest #2
Sponsored by Ironic Zink

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Daybreak

Dusk
turns to
dawn bringing
daylight to our
world

creationlanterne

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:13:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Jan :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Daybreak" what a lovely write/pretty picture. Have a blessed day/week......................

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2023 8:19:00 AM

thanks so much Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2023 2:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan, Lovely write

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2023 8:19:00 AM

thanks so much for my placement Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2016 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM

Many thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/12/2016 5:55:00 AM

Very nice ... Congratulations on your win ...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM

Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/11/2016 4:58:00 PM

lovely vision JAN....Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM

Many thanks Seren I LOVE that avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/11/2016 3:53:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your podium win in the Lanterne contest. Beautiful imagery we sometimes take for granted! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:25:00 AM

We do take things for granted Sandra - I appreciate things so much more now I am able to put my thoughts on paper:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

Date: 10/11/2016 11:56:00 AM

beautiful Jan! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM

Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/11/2016 1:50:00 AM

Very good Lanterne, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM

Many thanks Jo I must try this form again sometime:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/11/2016 12:25:00 AM

Congratulation, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM

Many thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 10/10/2016 10:06:00 PM

Jan, grats on your placement :D xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2016 7:23:00 AM

Many thanks Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/10/2016 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan. Congrats on your win. I have never written a lanterne, but I think I like them very much.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2016 6:41:00 PM

I've just checked and this is the only one I have ever written:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/10/2016 5:35:00 PM

Simple and Lovely, Jan - congrats! CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thanks CayCay I think this is the first poem i wrote in this form I know I have not written many:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 10/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful lantern.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink

Date: 10/10/2016 4:38:00 PM

Great write Jan! I'm happy to have allowed old and new poems to read! This contest was packed full of excellent poems! Job well done... Mr. ZinK :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM

Many many thanks Mr Zink you have made my day:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2015 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. I think that Lanternes are such cute little forms to use. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2016 6:52:00 AM

oops I missed replying before :-) thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/4/2015 2:57:00 PM

Hi Jan: Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2015 3:05:00 PM

Many thanks Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2015 1:42:00 PM

Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:41:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2015 2:32:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 5/3/2015 7:38:00 PM

Congrats Jan...these certainly are tricky to write...nicely written

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2015 2:31:00 AM

Thanks David I must get round to congratulating the winners:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2015 3:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 3:36:00 PM

Oh Thanks Joseph i hadn't seen it has been posted:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 4/6/2015 9:48:00 PM

How beautiful! All the best for the contest!! :D

Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2015 12:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 4/4/2015 7:58:00 AM

A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2015 11:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Funom:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/30/2015 9:26:00 PM

Lovely poem Jan, the lanterne form I think is wonderful to write in. Good luck in the contest. Your friend Shane xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2015 1:38:00 AM

Thanks Shane it's not a form I am that au fait with:-) Hugs Jan xx

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