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submitted to Lanterne Frenzy Contest #2
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Daybreak

Dusk
turns to
dawn bringing
daylight to our
world

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Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 8:34 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 20, 2023 at 2:13 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Jan :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

November 19, 2023 at 8:01 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Daybreak" what a lovely write/pretty picture. Have a blessed day/week......................

Jan Allison

November 19, 2023 at 8:19 AM

thanks so much Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

November 18, 2023 at 2:56 AM

Congrats on your win Jan, Lovely write

Jan Allison

November 19, 2023 at 8:19 AM

thanks so much for my placement Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

October 12, 2016 at 6:31 AM

Congratulations, Jan!

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:26 AM

Many thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

October 12, 2016 at 5:55 AM

Very nice ... Congratulations on your win ...

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:26 AM

Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

October 11, 2016 at 4:58 PM

lovely vision JAN....Seren

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:26 AM

Many thanks Seren I LOVE that avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

October 11, 2016 at 3:53 PM

Jan, congratulations on your podium win in the Lanterne contest. Beautiful imagery we sometimes take for granted! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:25 AM

We do take things for granted Sandra - I appreciate things so much more now I am able to put my thoughts on paper:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

October 11, 2016 at 11:56 AM

beautiful Jan! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM

Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

October 11, 2016 at 1:50 AM

Very good Lanterne, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM

Many thanks Jo I must try this form again sometime:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

October 11, 2016 at 12:25 AM

Congratulation, Jan.

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM

Many thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

October 10, 2016 at 10:06 PM

Jan, grats on your placement :D xx

Jan Allison

November 28, 2016 at 7:23 AM

Many thanks Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

October 10, 2016 at 6:39 PM

Beautiful, Jan. Congrats on your win. I have never written a lanterne, but I think I like them very much.

Jan Allison

October 10, 2016 at 6:41 PM

I've just checked and this is the only one I have ever written:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

October 10, 2016 at 5:35 PM

Simple and Lovely, Jan - congrats! CayCay

Jan Allison

October 10, 2016 at 6:21 PM

Thanks CayCay I think this is the first poem i wrote in this form I know I have not written many:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

October 10, 2016 at 5:08 PM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful lantern.

Jan Allison

October 10, 2016 at 5:11 PM

Thanks so much Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink

October 10, 2016 at 4:38 PM

Great write Jan! I'm happy to have allowed old and new poems to read! This contest was packed full of excellent poems! Job well done... Mr. ZinK :)

Jan Allison

October 10, 2016 at 5:11 PM

Many many thanks Mr Zink you have made my day:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

May 6, 2015 at 9:27 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. I think that Lanternes are such cute little forms to use. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

October 6, 2016 at 6:52 AM

oops I missed replying before :-) thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

May 4, 2015 at 2:57 PM

Hi Jan: Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison

May 4, 2015 at 3:05 PM

Many thanks Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

May 4, 2015 at 1:42 PM

Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

May 4, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

May 3, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Jan, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

Jan Allison

May 4, 2015 at 2:32 AM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs jan xx

David Mohn

May 3, 2015 at 7:38 PM

Congrats Jan...these certainly are tricky to write...nicely written

Jan Allison

May 4, 2015 at 2:31 AM

Thanks David I must get round to congratulating the winners:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

May 3, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison

May 3, 2015 at 3:36 PM

Oh Thanks Joseph i hadn't seen it has been posted:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

April 6, 2015 at 9:48 PM

How beautiful! All the best for the contest!! :D

Jan Allison

April 7, 2015 at 12:29 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

April 4, 2015 at 7:58 AM

A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 11:29 AM

Thanks so much Funom:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

March 30, 2015 at 9:26 PM

Lovely poem Jan, the lanterne form I think is wonderful to write in. Good luck in the contest. Your friend Shane xx

Jan Allison

March 31, 2015 at 1:38 AM

Thanks Shane it's not a form I am that au fait with:-) Hugs Jan xx

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