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Contest Illumination – Steven Henderson

Dusk turns to dawn bringing daylight to our world submitted to Lanterne Frenzy Contest #2 Sponsored by Ironic Zink 03~29~15

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Date: 10/12/2016 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM
Many thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/12/2016 5:55:00 AM
Very nice ... Congratulations on your win ...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM
Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2016 4:58:00 PM
lovely vision JAN....Seren
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:26:00 AM
Many thanks Seren I LOVE that avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2016 3:53:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your podium win in the Lanterne contest. Beautiful imagery we sometimes take for granted! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/28/2016 7:25:00 AM
We do take things for granted Sandra - I appreciate things so much more now I am able to put my thoughts on paper:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2016 11:56:00 AM
beautiful Jan! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM
Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2016 1:50:00 AM
Very good Lanterne, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM
Many thanks Jo I must try this form again sometime:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/11/2016 12:25:00 AM
Congratulation, Jan.
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:24:00 AM
Many thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2016 10:06:00 PM
Jan, grats on your placement :D xx
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:23:00 AM
Many thanks Darren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2016 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful, Jan. Congrats on your win. I have never written a lanterne, but I think I like them very much.
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Date: 10/10/2016 6:41:00 PM
I've just checked and this is the only one I have ever written:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2016 5:35:00 PM
Simple and Lovely, Jan - congrats! CayCay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/10/2016 6:21:00 PM
Thanks CayCay I think this is the first poem i wrote in this form I know I have not written many:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2016 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful lantern.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2016 4:38:00 PM
Great write Jan! I'm happy to have allowed old and new poems to read! This contest was packed full of excellent poems! Job well done... Mr. ZinK :)
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM
Many many thanks Mr Zink you have made my day:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/6/2015 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jan. I think that Lanternes are such cute little forms to use. Hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/6/2016 6:52:00 AM
oops I missed replying before :-) thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/4/2015 2:57:00 PM
Hi Jan: Congrats on your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/4/2015 3:05:00 PM
Many thanks Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/4/2015 1:42:00 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/4/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/3/2015 9:41:00 PM
Jan, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/4/2015 2:32:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/3/2015 7:38:00 PM
Congrats Jan...these certainly are tricky to write...nicely written
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/4/2015 2:31:00 AM
Thanks David I must get round to congratulating the winners:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/3/2015 3:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/3/2015 3:36:00 PM
Oh Thanks Joseph i hadn't seen it has been posted:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2015 5:43:00 AM
The sun rise really is the first wonder of the world!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2015 6:27:00 AM
So true Troy! where would we be without it! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2015 9:48:00 PM
How beautiful! All the best for the contest!! :D
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2015 12:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/4/2015 7:58:00 AM
A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 4/4/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Funom:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/30/2015 9:26:00 PM
Lovely poem Jan, the lanterne form I think is wonderful to write in. Good luck in the contest. Your friend Shane xx
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:38:00 AM
Thanks Shane it's not a form I am that au fait with:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/30/2015 8:22:00 PM
Hi, Jan thank you for stopping by to read my poem. I read your poem Daybreak. It was wonderful.#7
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:37:00 AM
Thanks Deborah:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/30/2015 10:36:00 AM
Daybreak is the most wonderful thing to see it is so pure :) Great poem Jan-Love Ettie
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/31/2015 1:37:00 AM
Thanks Ettie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/29/2015 10:09:00 PM
Simple but vital, love it!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/30/2015 2:27:00 AM
Thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
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