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Daybreak

I woke this morning, Tiptoed down the stairs, Made my coffee, And stepped outside into The thick, breathless silence That only fog can bring. Grass and trees invisible, Not a single birdsong, No dripping from the trees, Not a whisper of wind, No sound at all. Mesmerized by the Completeness of the quiet, I sat on the steps And drank my coffee. Slowly, slowly, the mists Began to swirl and thin And turn to a golden haze Until the sun broke through, And the birds began to sing. The day had begun.

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Date: 8/18/2021 7:24:00 AM
I now live in a senior residence. I do miss my old house and the wide porch and living near the ocean. We used to get a lot of fog.
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Date: 8/18/2021 12:46:00 AM
I lived the day with you. Sometimes simple words are far better than complicated ones.
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Date: 8/14/2021 12:11:00 PM
So many today living in a fog are waiting for that moment to break .....
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/14/2021 7:05:00 PM
Amen to that!!

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