Daybreak

I woke this morning,
Tiptoed down the stairs,
Made my coffee,
And stepped outside into
The thick, breathless silence
That only fog can bring.
Grass and trees invisible,
Not a single birdsong,
No dripping from the trees,
Not a whisper of wind,
No sound at all.
Mesmerized by the
Completeness of the quiet,
I sat on the steps
And drank my coffee.
Slowly, slowly, the mists
Began to swirl and thin
And turn to a golden haze
Until the sun broke through,
And the birds began to sing.
The day had begun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peckham Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:24 AM
I now live in a senior residence. I do miss my old house and the wide porch and living near the ocean. We used to get a lot of fog.
Omar Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:46 AM
I lived the day with you. Sometimes simple words are far better than complicated ones.
Leffanta Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:11 PM
So many today living in a fog are waiting for that moment to break .....
Peckham Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Amen to that!!
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