Daybreak

saying goodbye to you
gives me the power
to summon the dawn

hoisting the sun
like a little atlas
we never knew

i had such strength
i didn't cry that day
or the day after that
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 11, 2011 at 12:38 AM
Julia,A beautiful thought written in a few words.I've been reading your works and really enjoy them. You do have a poets heart and ,mind.Crossfox
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