Daybreak

 
Sun rises over open sedge; soft supple light sweeps across accordion bay. White Egrets in blue skies praise another day.
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Proxenos Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 1:53 AM
What a beautiful scene to wake up to! Nicely penned Allen. Hugs, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 5:00 PM
this is really beautiful description. Loved the accordian line.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Abdrea
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 11:03 AM
What a best way to take-in a mesmerising descriptive morn allen, Aloha wk
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 11:53 PM
Thanks William
Ashley Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Your poem is breathtaking in its beauty and artistry, Allen. Exquisite and vivid eloquence. Warmest wishes always.. ~
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 12:28 AM
Thank you Susan
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Beautifully, majestically imaged, Allen. Best wishes, Gershon
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Thank you Gershon
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:20 PM
A blessing not taken for granted.. you render it beautifully into poetic flair.. I enjoyed the read, Allen.. Best regards and blessings.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Thank you Besma
Callus Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 3:45 PM
A lovely image supplied by poetic words, Allen. The end couplet gives added meaning to the poem. Regards // paul
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Paul
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Excellent imagery in your beautiful poem, Allen.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Vijay
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