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Daybreak

 
Sun rises over open sedge;
soft supple light sweeps
across accordion bay.

White Egrets in blue skies
praise another day.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/23/2019 1:53:00 AM

What a beautiful scene to wake up to! Nicely penned Allen. Hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2019 5:00:00 PM

this is really beautiful description. Loved the accordian line.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/22/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Abdrea

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/22/2019 11:03:00 AM

What a best way to take-in a mesmerising descriptive morn allen, Aloha wk

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/22/2019 11:53:00 PM

Thanks William

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/21/2019 10:52:00 PM

Your poem is breathtaking in its beauty and artistry, Allen. Exquisite and vivid eloquence. Warmest wishes always.. ~

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/22/2019 12:28:00 AM

Thank you Susan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/21/2019 9:06:00 PM

Beautifully, majestically imaged, Allen. Best wishes, Gershon

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/22/2019 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Gershon

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/21/2019 4:20:00 PM

A blessing not taken for granted.. you render it beautifully into poetic flair.. I enjoyed the read, Allen.. Best regards and blessings.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/22/2019 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Besma

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2019 3:45:00 PM

A lovely image supplied by poetic words, Allen. The end couplet gives added meaning to the poem. Regards // paul

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/21/2019 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2019 3:44:00 PM

Excellent imagery in your beautiful poem, Allen.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/21/2019 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Daybreak

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