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Day One

Day one I showed up ready to start working at Der Wienerschnitzel. My first day was my last day. The trainer was a *wiener! *slang for a jerk (True story from my youth for Linda's Day One Poetry Contest)

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/27/2013 3:23:00 PM

ha ha nice one short and sweet

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/31/2013 5:45:00 PM

Cute one so they were real weiners. ha ha.love phyl

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/8/2013 6:25:00 PM

You lasted the whole day eh, I'm impressed lol. I'm sure you can handle jerks better now ha ha. Take care, Richard. Oh nearly forgot, congratulations

Donna Jones

Date: 7/7/2013 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea.....this is a really cute poem...made me smile again...

Skat A

Date: 7/6/2013 2:15:00 PM

good story from your youth

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/6/2013 11:15:00 AM

Oh well some days just go like that Andrea..have had a chuckle while I visited though..'

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/6/2013 6:08:00 AM

Smiling again reading this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2013 11:37:00 PM

thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/5/2013 10:46:00 PM

LOL...I like this! :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2013 9:33:00 PM

ha ha,,, not what I was looking for in my contest... sorry i spotted this one, and had to comment.. it was funny... thank you Andrea,,,, love...Linda

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/5/2013 8:42:00 PM

The deed is done...Thanks for the advice!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2013 4:13:00 PM

lol, love it : )

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/5/2013 3:56:00 PM

sure love this, different from you Andrea, but nothing surprises me anymore, regarding your wonderful talent!, not around much lately, but glad to call, i will again trust me....

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2013 6:43:00 AM

hehehe, felt like saying poor "wiener" Andrea, just kidding.. thanks for the laughs with this one :) love Wilma

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 8:40:00 PM

Mail

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 7:36:00 PM

Andrea - Yes, as far as I know all of the lines in the 'Twisted Thoughts' AND the 'Commercial Slam' series are my own creation...Of course, I would NEVER knowing plagerize!...On some I went to the internet just to make sure...Now you've got me wondering, so my plan is to do all of them now and of course, if I find anything, I will delete and issue an apology...I am going to go ahead and delete the food one now, and if I find it's all my own, repost in 3 parts as you suggested

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 PM

I may go ahead and delete all of them because it's not really poetry and doesn't belong on a poetry site

Ruby Honeytip

Date: 7/4/2013 2:26:00 PM

Hahahaha.......this is so adorable! I can relate :-).....Love Roobs xxxx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 11:35:00 AM

Haaa!!...Bet he was a real 'hot dog' too!...And the winner is: Andrea!...Come on up Andie and say a few words to your fans! (Wild applause, whistles, etc.) anDIE!-anDIE!-anDIE! Yeyyyyyyy!...'Aw shucks y'all, I'm speechless...First of all, I'd like to thank by good friend, Tim Ryerson...Come on up, Tim!...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2013 10:46:00 AM

Glad that your first work experience did not stop you from finding a job that suited you..Enjoyed reading this morning..Never heard that word used in that way..Live and learn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..Briton Riviere did some fantastic paintings..I enjoyed looking at them everyone.Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/3/2013 4:37:00 PM

I had a couple of one day jobs, too. I think you can find my older poems by going to Matthew Anish poetry. Happy Fourth to you and yours! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/3/2013 1:14:00 PM

Andrea; This is good. I too had a one day job when I was young. I was not tall enough. I had to be on my toes all day, so I didn't go back. Good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/3/2013 10:55:00 AM

Andrea great humor in this Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun

Date: 7/3/2013 9:54:00 AM

This is a fascinating tanka my dearest friend Andrea! A perfect idea & entry for the contest. i love it and so enjoyed reading it tonight;)). In fact, I also wrote one but I was late to enter it. I'll post it next time ;)) Thank you so much for sharing & your very inspiring & encouraging comments on my latest poem. Good luck and best wishes always! love much and biggest sweetest hugs, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 8:27:00 AM

Aww this is so cute!

Heather Ober

Date: 7/3/2013 7:23:00 AM

An adorably funny tanka - and based on a true story, no less! I love the way your mind works, lady! Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. You're right about the "stretched" couplets in my pawn shop poem haha. Had to get creative with the line length in that one! :)