Tom H. Poet I do not know?

Day One

Day one; a newborn sun
Bar the door on memories
And now let’s have some fun
Our minds sail off choppy seas
Stand tall, stillness finds your knees
And now let’s do as we please

Forest’s floor bristles with fur
Life carpets the thawing ground
It’s just like her; for a color blur
Heat erupts, a chorus of sound
Everything lost has been found
Heavy hearts have lost a pound

The sun’s rays, a new coat of paint
Melts the pain, darkness’s drain
Kicking a new path with no complaint
‘Cause there’s a fresh day to be slain
And as we peek at day two
Another life begins anew

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Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:32 PM Tom, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

Connie Gildersleeve July 15, 2013 at 9:03 AM Tom congratulations on your wonderfully written verse. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 12:03 AM Tom, Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

Len Gasun July 7, 2013 at 9:37 AM This is absolutely a great inspirational poem my dear friend Tom. MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN! Thanks for sharing! love & big hugs, Leonora

Donna Jones July 6, 2013 at 9:25 PM This is such a lovely uplifting poem...congratulations on your win

Karen Anglesey July 6, 2013 at 4:48 PM Tom, Superbly written with encouragement and great imagery Love the ending and congrats on your win :)

Skat A July 6, 2013 at 2:26 PM this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2013 at 11:20 PM TOM, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda Tom H. July 6, 2013 at 10:06 PM Thank you so much! I'm glad you could enjoy the poem =p

Shirley Candy July 5, 2013 at 10:50 PM Lovely poem. Congratz on your win. :))