Day One

Day One, so on and so forth 
That's about how we met 
Took him away from another girl
Soon learned the word regret!

Day Two . . .  wasn't any better
Not like I thought it'd be
That selfish girl came round
And took him back from me!

Well sister let me tell you 
That guy belongs to me    
He's just so immature
So now we're on Day Three!

Thirty days rolled by 
Before I think I knew 
I'd passed another Day One
Rolled up in number Two

Finally! . . . I woke up 
Just as the alarm rang
I'll be late for 8th grade
So up and out I sprang!
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Ndifelani Eric Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Day one. Day two.... i liked this one..
Heckman Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 10:53 AM
very well done...
Devnath  Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful piece, smells honey. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Jones Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Very cute....:-) congratulations
Anglesey Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Judy, a witty and enjoyable read. Congrats on the well deserved win :)
A  Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 2:17 PM
amazing
A   Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 11:35 PM
Judy, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda
Pettit Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 10:32 PM
A nice poem about adolescent puppy love.
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