Day I Became a Lover

it was last summer
you promised me
your love in presence of
thousands of
flowers & stars
you’d been the dream
of mine since that day
just imagine i couldn’t
sleep at night for
you’d stolen my sleep
both day & night
celebrations all around
with my dudes for
my bliss had reached
its summit i looked at
the surrounding, but
i could see nothing for
you’re everywhere
unlike those days
i could hear the songs
of ROBIN all the time
just like me it was
happy as well
i got tuned my guitar
& played it while ROBIN
was dancing on a branch
just over me
i sang songs of love, beauty
& harmony
i was overheard by
lasses next door
they gave me their company
showing no jealousy
i gave the news to
the boy next room
i was blind with love
and overjoyed
couldn’t imagine
the dawn of the next day
for it’d been the moment
you’d promised me to
meet up
i knew it’d be
MESMERIZING & SURPRISING
i knew that i would be
the moment i would
hold your tighter
it’d be the moment
i’d hug & kiss you
a song unending’s
being sung, but its
melody was unknown at all
for sure for i’d lost in yours
i got into my best clothes
and ambled towards the
park which was filled with flowers
i was full of excitements
for it was my first day
as a LOVER
‘at last i’d got my fiancee’,
i felt & i knew that
my life which was full of
fun would be over
for i had been a LOVER
at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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