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Day Goddess At Night Collaboration

Within Spring's timely and gentle fold, she blossomed eloquently for all to see, Tales of her epic, great beauty thus told, of a flower blossom awaiting its honey-bee. Meadows cried out and adored her sweet name grace in glory, of her they did proclaim. Sunny days sought to rival her soft allure and gentle clouds her heavenly flight. Womanhood, in her big heart so very pure that full moon envied her touch at night! Moonlight sought out her beautiful face, to lavish its gleams upon her every trace. Moonlight Queen she be, stares to dawn with stardust need, Speckled and bright her hope breathes the night she of night-wind allure Could there be softer steps for love to walk? Mountains moan 'neath her call? Such silver Goddess, sweet kisses to dawn wild with starry-winks, how she must sing! ---- Glazed as newborn dreams, Galaxy after galaxy call her name: They've come to patron her lovely, (we) in our watching world, gaze her night-wind allure Collaboration of Robert Lindley (first 12 lines) and Keith O.J. Hunt (last 12 lines)

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Date: 1/31/2016 10:01:00 PM
I am waiting for the season you describe so well here to arrive. Enough of snow and ice! Fine write! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:02:00 AM
Helllo Keith, So glad to see you are back writing, your poetry was missed. This is such a beauty of a poem .Well done to both of you.. Charma : )
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/20/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Charma, the juices are starting to flow again.... I usually don't write unless I'm deeply inspired. I will try to spin a few gems this holiday season. So very nice of you to say that my poetry was missed; one never knows 'til they know. Keith ;-)
Date: 12/19/2015 3:15:00 PM
Keith , my good friend , it is a great pleasure and joy for me to write with you! Your verses sing eloquently and compliment the spirit and message of the poem so very well.I could not have asked for a better closing set of verses! Thanks ...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/10/2016 6:32:00 PM
OK, JUST NOW FOUND THIS AGAIN MY FRIEND.. SORRY ABOUT MY MEMORY AND ITS ILL EFFECTS. I am working on one now almost ready to send to you to add YOUR BRILLIANT closing verses!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/19/2015 6:46:00 PM
Enjoyed this write very much too Robert; your fine pen made the words flow with ease.... however, the first 12 lines are the best! We shall spin some more stars again you and I! ( you start!) (lol)
Date: 12/19/2015 2:11:00 PM
- Well done collaboration poem, Keith ! - Lovely written from you guys - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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