Day Goddess At Night

Day Goddess at Night
  (a collaboration)

Within Spring's timely and gentle fold,
she blossomed eloquently for all to see,
Tales of her epic, great beauty thus told,
of a flower blossom awaiting its honey-bee.

Meadows cried out and adored her sweet name
grace in glory, of her they did proclaim.

Sunny days sought to rival her soft allure
and gentle clouds her heavenly flight.
Womanhood, in her big heart so very pure
that full moon envied her touch at night!

Moonlight sought out her beautiful face,
to lavish its gleams upon her every trace.

Moonlight Queen she be,
stares to dawn with stardust need,
Speckled and bright her hope breathes the night
she of night-wind allure

Could there be softer steps for love to walk?
Mountains moan 'neath her call?

Such silver Goddess, sweet kisses to dawn
wild with starry-winks, how she must sing! ----
Glazed as newborn dreams,
Galaxy after galaxy call her name:

They've come to patron her lovely, 
(we) in our watching world, gaze her night-wind allure

Robert J. Lindley & Keith O.J. Hunt, 
12-19-2015

Note: Keith , thanks for gifting me, the pleasure and honor of 
penning verses with you. Your poems and magnificent classic style 
verses always speak to me and have often given me inspiring thoughts
 my good friend.
Any time.. Thanks...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/10/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Funom. I hope you are doing well this year..
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:52:00 AM
A superb collaboration poem which had totally compelled me tonight my dear friend, Robert. I love it very much and enjoyed thoroughly the story. A precious gem! Thank you so much for sharing! A 7+++ fave. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my poem and your very encouraging words. More blessings and Have a Very Merry Christmas to you and your family! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/19/2015 5:52:00 PM
It's been a pleasure writing with you Robert; it was easy for me to write in response to your graceful first 12 lines(!), which I believe is superior to mine. Many thanks for your major compliments which touches my heart that I inspire such a great poet! May we write many more my friend. Keith O.J. Hunt ;-)
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