Day Dreaming

Looking up at the waterfall
as it cascaded into the pool
sound of running water
as it flowed downstream
his thoughts rambled
lost in a day dream
always come back to her
visions on his mind
no matter where he was
she would be there smiling
he could almost reach out 
and touch her cheek
with a heavy sigh
he turned to leave
would he ever see her
or was she a fragment
of his imagination
this girl who appears in dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Hello Phyllis, |I like this poem,I ca vision him reaching out for her.A very nice daydream. Have a nice day my friend.
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. Have a great day. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Hello Phyllis … it's marvellous what we see as we focus upon water and it does have a calming or reflective disposition - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Thanks my friend. Have been busy so behind in my comments of late. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Ball Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Lovely Very restful and thoughtful piece. Loved the imagery here. Hope all is well with you. My sight is much better now after surgery and am going in to have the other eye done on the 18th. God Bless, JB
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Judy. So glad to hear you are doing much better. I have some minor surgery ahead. Glad you are getting both eyes looked after. Hugs my friend. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 1:44 PM
- He has beautiful dreams, Phyllis - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Thanks my friend. Behind in my comments and in writing. Have a great week. love phyl
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