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Day Dreaming

Looking up at the waterfall as it cascaded into the pool sound of running water as it flowed downstream his thoughts rambled lost in a day dream always come back to her visions on his mind no matter where he was she would be there smiling he could almost reach out and touch her cheek with a heavy sigh he turned to leave would he ever see her or was she a fragment of his imagination this girl who appears in dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/4/2018 11:53:00 AM
Hello Phyllis, |I like this poem,I ca vision him reaching out for her.A very nice daydream. Have a nice day my friend.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/13/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. Have a great day. love phyl
Date: 6/3/2018 8:20:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … it's marvellous what we see as we focus upon water and it does have a calming or reflective disposition - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/13/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Have been busy so behind in my comments of late. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Date: 5/24/2018 9:30:00 PM
Lovely Very restful and thoughtful piece. Loved the imagery here. Hope all is well with you. My sight is much better now after surgery and am going in to have the other eye done on the 18th. God Bless, JB
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/13/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Judy. So glad to hear you are doing much better. I have some minor surgery ahead. Glad you are getting both eyes looked after. Hugs my friend. love phyl
Date: 5/17/2018 1:44:00 PM
- He has beautiful dreams, Phyllis - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/13/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Behind in my comments and in writing. Have a great week. love phyl

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