Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

Day Dream Moment

Sometimes my head is in the clouds

 Shutting out  a moment of time

 I stare  at a realm beyond

My mind drifts in and out of fantasy land

Bringing warm sensations to the overcrowded mind

Immune to the world around

Lost in a cloud that encircles the vision

Where reality leaves and the dream world awakes

Envisioning  a perfect state

A glimpse of a peaceful day dream moment

A sound jolts me back to reality

The clouds float away, and my day dream moment gone.

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Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2011 at 9:21 PM ahhh, calgon, take me away. You were having such a sweet calgon moment there!! I'm sure glad I stumbled on this one I had not read . Let me see if I can find at least one more new one for me!

Jessica D'Agostino May 12, 2010 at 10:23 PM I too, day dream often. Very good poem, glad to have read it tonight. -Jesse

Simone Segal March 28, 2010 at 9:26 AM I beleive our day dreaming is where reality lies! love Simone

Carol Sunshine Brown March 24, 2010 at 7:30 AM I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Phyllis. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire March 23, 2010 at 9:27 PM As a child, I spent much time lost in daydreams. They were indeed visions of "a perfect state," Phillis. Wish they didn't have to end. Terriffic writing! Love, Carolyn

March 23, 2010 at 5:48 PM We all need a bit of fantasy in these challening times to keep our sanity. I like the uplifting feel of this poem. Keep on writing. Thank you for your comment. Karen

Mitch White March 23, 2010 at 5:21 PM Beautiful dreamy day spent in a flash- enjoyed it- if you read my `Mother Nature` the similar words in the same places on each poem are surreal

Doris Culverhouse March 23, 2010 at 4:30 PM lovely--enjoyed reading

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 23, 2010 at 4:10 PM Sounds lovely Phyllis and something to look forward to if it does exist..count me in too... beautiful imagery and lovely flowing lines..enjoyed... hope u will comment on my new blog today..luv.. Linda-Marie..