Day Dream

I dream of what will be,
What is for thee,
To behold the beauty,
The sky at night,
What will be for thee,
All round me I see,
The light from dreams,
born to the void of forgetfulness,
Light from within that once burn bright,
Now lies beyond the realm of lost dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 30, 2008 at 5:59 AM
Terry - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 11, 2008 at 8:48 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 7:41 PM
Terry - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 28, 2008 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 20, 2008 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations on this lovely poem being featured this week, Terry. Lainie
Jordan Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 12:52 PM
Terry congrats on having your poem featured this week
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August 18, 2008 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations Terry on having your poem featured! Nicole
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August 18, 2008 at 10:05 AM
A re-feature for "Day Dream." Congrats, Terry. Vince
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August 18, 2008 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations Terry on your beautiful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
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August 18, 2008 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations Terry on your poetry being featured once again this week. Love, Carol
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July 6, 2008 at 8:40 AM
Hi Terry Loved this! Beyond the realm of dreams....Congrats on your feature write this week! Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia
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June 15, 2008 at 2:37 PM
Hello~ Terry congrats! on your featured poem.Continue to dream. B BlESS Crystal
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June 11, 2008 at 6:58 AM
Interesting reflection. I like the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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June 10, 2008 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations Terry on the featuring of "Day Dream." God Bless the dreamers. Vince
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