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Day Change

These changes in a day are
rippling through me
Down right crippling
you'll see
Some days I feel like 
a toilet of crap
A revolting smell
that snaps at my back
Other days I speak
sideways in tongues
The language of cohesion
levitating unhung
And other days I see
the spreading of canker
A slow bubbling 
of pernicious anger
Popping pustules
of infectious rancor

(Work in progress)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/16/2016 1:43:00 PM
Love the rhyme!
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Date: 6/16/2016 5:03:00 PM
Appreciate the feedback.

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