Day Break

Arise
   And listen as,
   Dawns chorus greets, earths light.
   Sweet songbirds sing, and heralds in
   Sunrise


   6/ 8/ 2015.

sunshinecinquain

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Sara Kendrick

June 12, 2015 at 3:23 PM

I see that somehow your poem got in my contest twice and it got rated two different ratings ..How that happened I do not know ..I went in and tried to correct it but I could not correct it..The highest placement is correct one..Thanks for your participation for I enjoyed reading your work..Sara

George Seal

June 15, 2015 at 3:55 AM

Hello Sara, thankyou for trying to sort out the gremlins and also for your nice comment on my poem. I know from a past experience things can go wrong that cannot be altered. George.

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2015 at 11:53 PM

a pretty one for nature. Congrats.

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:00 PM

Hi Andrea, your comments are always welcome to me thankyou. George.

Eve Roper

June 11, 2015 at 4:52 PM

Congratulations on your win, hugs dear friend Eve

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:36 PM

Hi Eve, it's so nice of you to give me your best wishes. Thankyou. George.

Skat A

June 11, 2015 at 3:49 PM

George, Congratulations........ SKAT

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Hi SKAT, thanks for your support once again Cheers George.

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:08 PM

George, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:43 PM

Hello LINDA, so good of you to visit again with your congratulations. Cheers. George

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 1:59 PM

George, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:45 PM

Hi LINDA, Ditto above. George.

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:09 AM

not sure how you got 7th and a HM for the same poem - technical glitch I guess! lol hugs jan xx

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:12 PM

Hello Jan, thanks for your visit. I agree with you on it being a technical glitch as something like this has happened to me before. Sara has given my 7th place as the correct one so i am happy. George

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations George:-) Hugs jan xx

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:49 PM

Thankyou Jan, you are such a treasure. George.

Kim Merryman

June 10, 2015 at 9:36 PM

This is lovely, George! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 4:52 PM

Hello Kim, i appreciate your very nice comments on my poem Thankyou. George.

Jan Allison

June 8, 2015 at 6:00 PM

what a delightful image - I have written one on a similar theme - not for the contest - wont be posting it for a couple of days yet - great minds think alike! Hugs jan xx

George Seal

July 14, 2015 at 5:22 PM

Hi Jan not for the contest. Why! Cheers George.