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Day Break

The sun slowly rises over the horizon casting its rays turning night to day. Chasing away the lingering darkness revealing the hills and shadow cast valleys. Details become more apparent showing the pretty flowers and stately trees. With lake's waters glistening brightly reflecting the beaming sun rays. Peace of day now shattered by the raucous chorus of crows. As dipping down they fly mugging the other birds. Soon scattering at gunfire from the farmers crop scarer's. Joyful tunes now abound As song birds sing out their hearts Welcoming dawn's warm rays hustle and bustle as people awake and tranquillity slips away as dawn becomes full day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/5/2014 10:23:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely day breaking in the West Country, always seems different whilst there on holiday ...... Seren
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/8/2014 1:30:00 AM
Yes we have been very lucky with mainly sunshine I sat outside at Costa's yesterday in the sun hugs
Date: 11/5/2014 7:50:00 AM
Shadow, A most beautiful poem here. I enjoyed this very much. A "7" too from me and this one's a FAV. Best Wishes, Gary
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/8/2014 1:28:00 AM
much appreciated ty Gary hugs
Date: 11/5/2014 4:31:00 AM
uplifting me all the way, shadow.., such a calm, lovely piece!.. huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2014 7:12:00 AM
ty Nette glad you enjoyed it hugs