Day At the Beach

the waves are crashing
the sight is dashing
the sea so cold
the waves loud and bold

all the umbrellas casting shade
sand castles being made
my feet bare in the sand
the sunset is so grand

all the sand in my hair
flipflops below every chair
the breeze washes away every mistake
it feels so good with every breath I take

and in the dark
i see a little shark
As i eat an ice cream cone
I guess it's time to go home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Sounds like a lovely day.
Pettit Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Sounds like a good description of life at the Jersey Shore in May through September. Decent wording and rhyming.
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