Day At the Beach

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Summer days Great expectations Torrid sun Cool ocean breeze Lounging on a sandy beach Suntan lotion and bikinis Scattered towels Transistor radios Picnic coolers Fun and games Flying frisbies Bouncing beach balls Laughter fills the air Come on in The water’s great Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~RANDOM MUSINGS VOL.1~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Front Page Pick 2020 Posted on June 6, 2019

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/10/2019 9:37:00 AM

I will be going to the beach just now. And what amazes me most is that there is absolutely no plastic at Oliva Beach, just water and lots of fun ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2019 11:48:00 AM

I'm all for that, Kai. Enjoy yourself!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/7/2019 9:22:00 PM

This part made me smile, for I figured you were talking about the 60's. "Transistor radios". I have not heard this term for over thirty years.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2019 9:48:00 PM

Had to sneak that one in there. That was about the last time I wore a bikini at the beach. LOL

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/7/2019 7:24:00 PM

G'day Line … Oh, you forgot about sharks, jellyfish, flies etc. - haha. Oops sorry, I shouldn't spoil a day at the beach. I did enjoy your verse on this chilly morn Line - Lindsay

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2019 8:06:00 PM

Of course, the sand ticks and the sunburn.