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Day and Night

Day and night, God search our focus
Fears and desires recede
We waver not from love locus
Our will to divine cede

No secrets to ferret
Judge not fault or merit
Climbing to the summit

Bliss delight
Day and night

20-August-2021
Quietus

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2021 4:40:00 PM I will print this one out and try to use it as my model. So the refrain needs to come from first part of the first line? It can't be from the middle part? Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/13/2021 6:54:00 PM Yes, refrain is from the first part of the first line, also becoming the poem title

Jan Allison Date: 9/10/2021 2:16:00 PM what a wonderful form and a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/10/2021 8:21:00 PM Thank you Jan! Give this form a try!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/31/2021 1:52:00 PM wonderful! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/31/2021 5:54:00 PM Happy you like it, Andrea!

Constance La France Date: 8/31/2021 1:22:00 PM Seeker, another great example for your contest, hope I can write a poem worthy ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/31/2021 5:54:00 PM I’m sure you’ll take this form to another level!