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Day and night, God search our focus Fears and desires recede We waver not from love locus Our will to divine cede No secrets to ferret Judge not fault or merit Climbing to the summit Bliss delight Day and night 20-August-2021 Quietus

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Date: 9/13/2021 4:40:00 PM
I will print this one out and try to use it as my model. So the refrain needs to come from first part of the first line? It can't be from the middle part?
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Date: 9/13/2021 6:54:00 PM
Yes, refrain is from the first part of the first line, also becoming the poem title
Date: 9/10/2021 2:16:00 PM
what a wonderful form and a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2021 8:21:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Give this form a try!
Date: 8/31/2021 1:52:00 PM
wonderful!
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Date: 8/31/2021 5:54:00 PM
Happy you like it, Andrea!
Date: 8/31/2021 1:22:00 PM
Seeker, another great example for your contest, hope I can write a poem worthy ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 8/31/2021 5:54:00 PM
I’m sure you’ll take this form to another level!