Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Day and Night

Day and night, God search our focus
Fears and desires recede
We waver not from love locus
Our will to divine cede

No secrets to ferret
Judge not fault or merit
Climbing to the summit

Bliss delight
Day and night

20-August-2021
Quietus

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Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2021 at 4:40 PM I will print this one out and try to use it as my model. So the refrain needs to come from first part of the first line? It can't be from the middle part? Unseeking Seeker September 13, 2021 at 6:54 PM Yes, refrain is from the first part of the first line, also becoming the poem title

Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 2:16 PM what a wonderful form and a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx Unseeking Seeker September 10, 2021 at 8:21 PM Thank you Jan! Give this form a try!

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2021 at 1:52 PM wonderful! Unseeking Seeker August 31, 2021 at 5:54 PM Happy you like it, Andrea!

Constance La France August 31, 2021 at 1:22 PM Seeker, another great example for your contest, hope I can write a poem worthy ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Unseeking Seeker August 31, 2021 at 5:54 PM I’m sure you’ll take this form to another level!