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In timeless fashion In wordless passion The moon beams for you The clouds play hide and seek The stars eyes twinkled on you The sun rays brighten up your day While the heat lay kisses on your cheeks The wind danced and blew your cares away The birds sang sweetly filling the day with song In timeless fashion, wordless passion this day romanced you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/26/2014 6:13:00 AM
Vibrant and lovely, it ease the stressed while reading this. Great pen.
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:43:00 PM
what a lovely write, Phyll
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
Dear Phyllis, How wonderful that nature as "romanced" her in so many special ways. What a beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:34:00 PM
I love how the lines got longer and longer as you built your message, how the day romanced you. This was really cute. thanks for seeing SO many of my poems. what a dear you are. and I'm sorry it was a crappy year so far. Mine has been ok. Better than last year for sure. Let me see if you have any other new ones I have not seen.
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Date: 5/14/2014 10:50:00 PM
nice, and sweet..PD
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Date: 5/14/2014 3:17:00 PM
awwwww,thank you very much Phyllis,your words romanced me along the day,,,wonderful write
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Date: 5/8/2014 12:27:00 PM
- Phyllis, sounded like a lovely day ... - It's nice to read :) - Hope you are well :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:21:00 AM
Ahhh!! I needed that one..Enjoyed..Sara
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