Day 4

I'm a new creation, going through 
construction; He's replacing and 
erasing my sinful nature that had 
me facing destruction...

Finally I've awakened, after all the 
breaking, I've been shaken, no 
mistaking, this walk I'm delightfully 
taking, no more giving my goals to 
satan, no more faking, all the fallen 
leaves I'm raking, shaking, all the 
flaking, residue that had me aching, 
my world was quaking, like a pipe I 
needed snaking, now my blessings 
I'm retaking, for I was never 
forsaken, a testimony in the 
making...

I'm a new creation, going through 
construction; He's replacing and 
erasing my sinful nature that had 
me facing destruction...
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January 27, 2013 at 3:31 PM
So nice to read your work today. I really liked the enjambment. Light & Love
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