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Day 1 I was defeated That very first day You held your baguette you had that Alizee sway Love in Paris, always sweet in May Days became months Love became profound We married and forever we said we'd keep Our love, that grew like singers as Joe Dassin knew Children danced and lumières were bright Noël was heaven; we held our hands so tight The journey was never easy, yet we knew we belonged Our future was forever, until père called us home The one day, when the autumn was almost done From out of no where the sound of machine guns Now its over, and the years have past When pure evil took you, yet our love always lasts I sing to les enfants, I tell them is alright Your mama is above, in the heavens so bright I kiss them and wrap my heart around their cuddly little souls Only later, deep in the night Do my tears begin to roll Notes: Dedicated to the victims of the Paris tragedy in Nov 2015. Loosely based on an interview of one of the victims who lost his wife, and also loosely based on the song my Louane called “Jour 1” Translations Alizee means both “go” and is the name of a popular French singer Lumieres in English means “lights” Les enfants = the children

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Date: 10/9/2016 8:34:00 PM
Hi Arthur, You have penned a sad and tragic write. When will this senseless acts of violence end? Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/9/2016 2:09:00 PM
Very sad story, mon ami, it is a day that will live in infamy! Very well done! I wrote two poems on the subject on the day the tragedy struck Paris!
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Date: 10/8/2016 5:37:00 PM
A sad story well told my friend.
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Date: 10/8/2016 11:11:00 AM
A love story ripped apart by senseless tragedy. Oh when will this world learn.
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Date: 10/8/2016 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful, sad and the final part touches profoundly. Full marks to you, Arthur! // paul
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:38:00 AM
heart-wrenching work beautifully impressed on my mind, in my heart, arthur... may we treasure life!..huggs
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:16:00 AM
Seeing the pictures my tears start to flow Arthur - such evil acts killing innocent men women and children - I can say no more except thank you for your wonderful words - you tackle subjects other's shy away from:-) hugs jan xx7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan is close to the anniversary, thus the poem, even I think it need some work.

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