Dawnsway

I was his earthquake
Shaking the ground at which he stood
He was an iridescent pebble
I tossed him like a skipping stone across the ocean
But I always found him
On a beachy island brought in by the waves
Stranded on a mountaintop 
Shining in a desolate night
Dropped from the claws of a heron
Landing in my sea of basal tears
Rising up he lit the sky
For he was my light
And with a single sadness
I could bring my sun 
Back to me
Shifting the day
Lengthening time
For he told me
I could make the 
Dawn sway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kinch  Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Just wish I could write like this....purely amazing.
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July 8, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much! I haven't been posting lately as my laptop broke but I have many poems I look forward to sharing!
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May 20, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Ohhhhhh IRIS, such a beauty of a poem. You're a talented writer :) Glorious imagery this is. So many lines ther I wish I would have written.
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May 22, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it. The kind words inspire me more than you know.
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May 16, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Absolutely beautiful and I love that phrase making the "Dawn sway" I wish I had thought if that. Wonderfully written Iris.
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May 19, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Thank you so much! I always had juggled these words around my poetry and finally found a spot to put it.
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