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Dawn's Answer

Over the city the sun begins its trip Dawn's answer is that life must begin anew The pale shadows which come with nightfall Signal the end of daytime frolics We live by the silent music of the sun One thousand and one tales will be told in the future but for now we must play a waiting game experience sun and moon and feel their respective power as we float on the ship of life

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Date: 10/25/2014 2:46:00 PM
looks like you have no new poems for me to see today. What can you tell me about Conceit magazine?
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful piece you've penned here Mathew. Love it! ;) love & light! xxxx D.
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Date: 10/15/2014 3:24:00 PM
Yes, one thousand and one tales will be told in the future, but what about today.... The best things in life are free, like the beauty of the sun and moon. It's a shame that we don't stop and take advantage of them.... This is a beautiful poem, Matthew. I enjoyed it very much!
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Date: 10/12/2014 8:26:00 PM
Hi, Matt, yes in answer to your question: I have written a few stories. A few got small prizes in flash story contests in the SP Quill magazine. Let me see your poem here now.
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Date: 10/12/2014 8:26:00 PM
wow, I really like this one a lot. Because you mentioned the sun, which I adore. Loved that line "silent music of the sun"
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