Dawn's Angel

Dawn's Angel

Solar rays eclipse
Planetary orbits grow pale
Venus' halo glows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Another lovely picture created in haiku form. awesome last line!
Mehta Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Very cute write on Dawn's Angel, Stephen
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Great one..Reads like a winner..Good luck if for the contest..Sara
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