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Dawning Snow

Clinging unto hope shining ever virgin white There shines a beacon sky alive with virgin snow Feeling its abandonment The skies dawn now grey tiny diamonds do fall A swan breaks water the stillness it now is gone truth behind crystal liquid Within reflection virgin snow is now falling Spilling out snowflakes Diamonds fall heaven's grace Snowflakes little drops of Faith Softly they do fall On earth they crunch beneath feet Frozen diamonds Rainbow's colours shining bright They shine with heaven's own light Dreams of love do shine Kisses fall like drops of snow Love is virgin white Covers heart with warmest glow Love unlike snow never fades A Collaboration by, Liam Mcdaid. & Michael P Clarke.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/14/2016 6:15:00 PM

A vibrant and wonderful poem filled with beauty in its highest. Loved this so much! ~ Keep up with these collabs! I cherish these. A 7 100%. -JWE

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2016 6:02:00 AM

- Each snowflake like a kiss from heaven, lovely written Mike & Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2016 5:44:00 PM

Liam and Mike you have excellelled in this beautiful gentle romantic write - into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/6/2016 4:20:00 PM

Wow! This is a very great poem. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read.........A.M.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/6/2016 3:49:00 PM

Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate,captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Mike.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So profound!Just amazing! truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^