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Dawning Snow

Clinging unto hope
shining ever virgin white
There shines a beacon
sky alive with virgin snow
Feeling its abandonment

The skies dawn now grey
tiny diamonds do fall
A swan breaks water
the stillness it now is gone
truth behind crystal liquid

Within reflection
virgin snow is now falling
Spilling out snowflakes
Diamonds fall heaven's grace
Snowflakes little drops of Faith

Softly they do fall
On earth they crunch beneath feet
Frozen diamonds
Rainbow's colours shining bright
They shine with heaven's own light

Dreams of love do shine
Kisses fall like drops of snow
Love is virgin white
Covers heart with warmest glow
Love unlike snow never fades

A Collaboration by,
Liam Mcdaid.
&
Michael P Clarke.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/14/2016 6:15:00 PM
A vibrant and wonderful poem filled with beauty in its highest. Loved this so much! ~ Keep up with these collabs! I cherish these. A 7 100%. -JWE
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Date: 11/14/2016 6:02:00 AM
- Each snowflake like a kiss from heaven, lovely written Mike & Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2016 5:44:00 PM
Liam and Mike you have excellelled in this beautiful gentle romantic write - into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2016 4:20:00 PM
Wow! This is a very great poem. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read.........A.M.
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Date: 11/6/2016 3:49:00 PM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate,captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Mike.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So profound!Just amazing! truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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