Dawning Daydreams

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Sunrise
whispers
on soft 
autumn breezes

floating 
sweetly
‘cross October 
horizons

bring beauty
to my 
dawning
daydreams 

that will 
forever 
be your
smile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 25, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Lovely, Chris ~ like plucking a flower from the heavens each and every morning the way you find your way to your muse :)
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October 25, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
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October 25, 2019 at 11:37 AM
- Beautiful, Chris ... as always :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 25, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate you Anne-Lise
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October 25, 2019 at 11:16 AM
It's nice to see your picture... the face of the man behind all the beatiful and romantic words :)
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October 25, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Hi there Becca. Thank you so much. You are always so kind to me. I sure would like to see something new from you my friend. I miss your poetry.
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October 25, 2019 at 9:35 AM
this one just floats, like the soft autumn breeze this morning...gorgeous my friend... i love this, but i think i love all of your poems...you never disappoint :) hugs
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October 25, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Sandy. That is such a nice thing to say. I feel the same way about your poetry. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me my friend. I am thrilled you found this one this morning.
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October 25, 2019 at 9:25 AM
This has brightened a gray weather day here Chris. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem :)
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October 25, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy to have helped brighten your day.
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October 25, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Mostly I love the flow... I know this poem is short, yet it leaves a beautiful feeling that will last a lifetime. My favorite part of the poem was in the midst of the best horizon on any given OCTOBER VIEW, a sweet light to look forward to. *This is the third poem I've read from a poet of this site, within this year. I'm so glad I was curious today. I just had to comment, I'm not impressed very easily, but here I am, a fan on my first read. Now, I wonder if your other works are as perfect.
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October 25, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so very much. I am humbled by your comment and a bit fearful now that you might be disappointed if you read more. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much and honored you would choose this as one of the three you have read this year. Thank you again for your kind and encouraging words this morning on your "breakfast of the skin" tour. : )
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October 25, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Continue * so much to look forward to, I like to call it "breakfast of the skin" enjoyed the title, Dawning Daydreams. I haven't had a favorite poem in years. Hopefully this poem is enjoyed and appreciated by others. @superfave Always & Forever The Poet Destroyer
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October 25, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Lovely, Chris.
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October 25, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much Line.
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