Dawn Whispers

Under a quilt of tule fog,
dawn whispers
don’t let go.

Two cells merge
one straight, one curved,
forming anew.

The egg of life,
containing all the knowledge
of the Universe.

You and I now,
mixed together forever,
like sugar and salt.

Me and you all mixed up.
An original master-piece,
with a new agenda.

Under a Quilt of tule Fog,
dawn whispers…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 8:45 PM
If you could get this read, all the prose writers would love it. I am not a big fan of free verse, but I've read enough to know this is a winner ... very deep ... CayCay
Barry Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 9:34 PM
I've read this poem many times in several different venues. Peace CayCay
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