Dawn Until Eve

Dearest mother bear my twin sisters sweet
Christening the first sister Dawn…
And the second sister Eve

One would become dazzling, the other one faint
Apparently essential they be separated at birth
Dawn in the morning and Eve would always come late

Ladies so exquisite and glorious blazing, radiant pure
Sunrise to sunset
Their pleasure of an acquaintance neither has ever endured

Although, plausible introductions may have occurred in poem or in tune
My youngest brother and I will always embrace them
For respectively I am titled Midnight and he is called Noon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 16, 2012 at 4:37 AM
Congrats on your win Michael.Enjoyed the read.
Burch Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations Michael!!! I enjoy reading your work...this one is very clever ;) Nicely done....Big hugggss~Deb~
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March 15, 2012 at 8:59 PM
wow,this was such cool personification. And I loved how you were midnight. you took MY name. I am always up until after midnight. Too bad they don't have a good name for 1 a.m!!! congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 1:58 PM
congrats Michael on an HM for quality lines of poetic art luv..
Smith Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Thank you very much.
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Michael. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Thank you Carol.
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