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Dawn Until Eve

Dearest mother bear my twin sisters sweet Christening the first sister Dawn… And the second sister Eve One would become dazzling, the other one faint Apparently essential they be separated at birth Dawn in the morning and Eve would always come late Ladies so exquisite and glorious blazing, radiant pure Sunrise to sunset Their pleasure of an acquaintance neither has ever endured Although, plausible introductions may have occurred in poem or in tune My youngest brother and I will always embrace them For respectively I am titled Midnight and he is called Noon

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Date: 3/16/2012 4:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Michael.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/16/2012 2:11:00 AM
Congratulations Michael!!! I enjoy reading your work...this one is very clever ;) Nicely done....Big hugggss~Deb~
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:59:00 PM
wow,this was such cool personification. And I loved how you were midnight. you took MY name. I am always up until after midnight. Too bad they don't have a good name for 1 a.m!!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:58:00 PM
congrats Michael on an HM for quality lines of poetic art luv..
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Michael Smith
Date: 3/15/2012 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/15/2012 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Michael Smith
Date: 3/15/2012 8:30:00 PM
Thank you Carol.

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