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Dawn Trial Denial Collaboration

DAWN TRIAL DENIAL I felt the warmth of sun it rose up early The world was bright and young but that was then Felt full of pep, perceived no aspect surly Sensed: This is now, shall be! time and again These changes I now feel oh! How I hate them When early mornings tear my peace asunder Unreasonable it seems; what is the stem? Such unyieldingly demanding stillness plunder But I did love them then those golden dawns As though in Eden; seems so long ago Yet now they‘re ruthless and Exile is born Should I assert I just can’t do them so? Admit I’m past my prime? Set for next phase Or wake, walk once more on these fields of praise. 23 August 2019 For Contest COLLABORATION SPONSORED by Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/28/2019 7:51:00 PM
Well done, Geoffrey. Congrats on your win.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/29/2019 4:06:00 AM
Thanks Line.

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