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Dawn Takes Wing

A lion roars, a mule brays A lamb frolics, a horse neighs A dog barks, a wolf howls A snake hisses, a bear growls A calf bleats, a rooster crows A moose bellows, an ox lows A turkey gobbles, a cow moos A mosquito buzzes, a pigeon coos A cat meows, a nightingale sings An alarm clock rings ~ Dawn takes wing

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/6/2018 1:55:00 PM

Shades of 'God's in His heaven - all's right with the world!'

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2018 9:50:00 PM

I like your comment, Michelle. Very astute! Much appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2018 8:08:00 PM

A wonderfully rhythmic, uptempo and charming poem, Gershon, with a fantastic last line. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2018 9:50:00 PM

Thank you for weighing in on this lightweight ditty, my friend! Best wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2018 8:23:00 AM

This is great! Well done :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 2:00:00 PM

Appreciate it, Heidi! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/5/2018 3:38:00 AM

Absolutely charming piece Wolfman <3 xomo!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 2:00:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Maureen. Thanks for the feedback! Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/5/2018 3:31:00 AM

I like the chances you are taking, changing things up a bit these days. This one is so fast paced, Gershon. Nicely penned.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 1:59:00 PM

I'm taking so many chances, pretty soon I'll be playing Monopoly. (A little humor -- very little!). Thank you for the support, Caren! :) gw

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2018 2:36:00 AM

Absolutely charming rhyme GW. I sleep badly so some days the radio alarm clock plays music and sometimes I just switch it off and catch much needed zeds lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 1:58:00 PM

You aren't the only one, sister!! I'm in the Me too club here. :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/5/2018 12:57:00 AM

How the world keeps active even as we sleep.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 1:58:00 PM

Yeah. How can we sleep with all that's going on? Look at everything we're missing. Time for a night owls club! Best always, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/5/2018 12:48:00 AM

all are busy in own task- nicely penned

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mahtab!