Dawn Reigns

radiance through leaves - 
no need for a parasol. . .
let the dawn rain down

For Brian Strand's 
TWO TO FIFTEEN any form/theme max 15 lines Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:42 PM
this is perfect
Brown Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Outstanding Haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe
Perritano Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 9:55 AM
well done!
A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 2:21 AM
WOW... ANOTHER CONCRATS. have yourself a wonderful valentines MISS POET QUEEN @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 5:29 PM
congrats Andrea on a fantastic first place win for first class poetry luv..
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:35 AM
Dawn reigns, so does Andrea, with this very special Haiku, congrats. harry
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 7:19 PM
Congrats, Andrea! A brilliant haiku. Blessings, Rhonda :)
Arno Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great win. Jon
Bunton Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Congrats! I like this!
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Wonderful! It's raining here now(7:30 PM,30th January)
A   Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Good luck in the contest, if its still going on. P.D.
Anish Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Liked the first line! I live in NY. Where are you from?
Freeman Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Awesome Haiku Andrea. Good luck. Agape, Moses
Owens Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Very Nice Andrea...it reminded me of a giant umbrella too...lol...Good luck in the contest...Marty
K. Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:22 AM
all smiles with this haiku, Andrea :) love your take on this photo, will do well in the contest, I'm sure! btw can't see any of the blogs at all either--actually it was one of your which I couldn't see last night, but now, it seems like it's all the blogs! very weird! hopefully the soup can fix this---I'm entering your contest btw ;)---thanks for all your nice comments :)
Austin Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 8:28 AM
This is bright and sunny. The weather here in Saginaw is fine for a change. It was quite cold yesterday. Love, daver
Meade Stephenson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Beautiful haiku you have penned here Andrea..paints such a spendid pic in my mind! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
Foster Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 12:18 AM
Picture perfect, good haiku, no caps....cheers Margaret
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:08 PM
Very impressive and fine images
Chachere Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:51 PM
nature is the only pure use in the end.good luck, Mrs.Dietrich.lol.so fun...(:I appreciate your comments as well, always a friend. -Always&Forever Lynette
Byrne Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:45 PM
e4xcellent as usual Andrea!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:37 PM
SOUP MAIL REPLY ... BLOGS STILL NOT WORKING ...luv.. me...
Richards Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Oh, this is a beauty, Andrea! I can see this in the winner's circle!! :) Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 6:55 PM
enjoyed
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