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Dawn On a Small Planet

Just a small speck on the cosmic wheel We must forge links with the unknown Before the shadow falls We can be seen dancing on a small planet ` As astral clouds pass us by we take stock of our posisition Not a moment to waste! We must survive in the unearthly landscape gather our strength for the final struggle In deepest space We dare to lift up our small flag It flatters bravely in the void

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/23/2010 4:58:00 PM
this cosmic magic is most likely very close to reality....Matthew, your visionary poem is the medium that communicates best our hopes for our future, I enjoy clean writes, without unnecessary punctuation that distorts the purity of the message, this poem succeeds immensely! BRAVO! jimbo
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:53:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..We definitely need to wake up..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work for I appreciate the support and encouragement..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:33:00 PM
Very interesting little poem, Matt, and I am glad to hear you are BACK !! Luv, andrea
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:01:00 PM
Interesting way to start off a new planet,, Kinda feels as we do float and not spin. I try not to think of us as small speks, but the truth is we are. Sorry my comment has nothing to do with your poem. I am just a Universe kind of girl. I like to view my self as a star viewing the earth for all its flaws. Nothing will get it straight, it is never to late, enjoyed,..LeeAnn
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