Dawn of Time

As I lay there across the bed
I feel his touch caressing  me 
With feather like fingers
He traces's  the length 
     Of my spine
Chills run through me
Like the dawn of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Callus Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:41 PM
This is beautiful and sensual, Debbie. In a way it reminds me of the 3rd poem which I posted @ Soup. Best regards // paul
Beaufort Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 6:39 AM
I would say that this relates to the quote you commented on. We are from the dawn of time, and something happened which made touching pleasurable. It was for our own survival--and it is pleasant to think of it in terms of where we come from as a species. We carry a long history of time's changes through the ages. It's a pleasant burden.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 4:53 PM
looked through your oldies and found this one. It's a GEM.
Duncan Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 8:55 PM
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Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Chills ran through me too... reading this excellent piece with that killer final line! BRAVO Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith
Carrillo Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 9:48 PM
This is good. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Duncan Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Thank you Sara ;}
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Deb. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 6:52 AM
i'll toast to this subtle sense of sensuality, debbie..:) huggs, nette
Awoh Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 3:01 AM
this is great
Duncan Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 6:38 AM
thank you ;}
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