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Dawn of Innocence

last night i stood searching for a salient star beneath a trenchant sky in hopes to find but one brightly shining amidst darkness to send my wishes adrift on this morning the veil of twilight lifted exposing a dawn of ivory innocence aglow with thoughts dancing on the breath of december it touched with excitement like a caress of feathered kisses falling from lips of new love i quivered in the moment before blushing beneath somber skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/11/2019 7:41:00 PM
I really like this. Its filled with hope, and happiness.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/12/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert :)
Date: 12/11/2019 11:50:00 AM
How incredibly beautiful is this, I'm not asking, I'm stating fact. Sandy, this just brings so much light and love to the scene you have painted with your words. I am in awe of your talent. Sigh.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris...i am touched that you loved this one so much...it was a beautiful morning in my corner of the world my friend... glad i could share the moments... hugs
Date: 12/11/2019 10:17:00 AM
Lovely imagery Sandra with a hint of romance. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom...i often think snow, first thing in the morning can be a romantic scene...something about its beauty allures, until i have to venture out in it, then it has a different affect on me... hugs
Date: 12/11/2019 10:13:00 AM
I see you have adopted some of Jeff’s style for this piece. I like how your thoughts flowed like a silken thread through each stanza. Hugs Rick.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Rick... the scene this morning inspired me but mornings there is no time to scribble in my bus... hugs

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