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Dawn of Flight

My sadness rises with the rooster robust call in the pre-dawn It’s haltingly reluctance seems to hang on to the morning mist drifting A stubborn departure exiting skyward feathery To-day is such a fine vapor mourning Sublime ecstasy fills my heart, watching heavy tear withdrawal grief undergo wet pillow evaporating disintegration On dove wings, the golden moist breeze soothes me Carrying my fears of another hurtful separation very far, up and away Such a wondrous dawn of flight beginning to a bright future evening starlight new day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/24/2018 7:38:00 PM
Every dawn brings a new day of new beginnings and limitless possibilities for hope and happiness. A beautifully optimistic poem Freddie with wonderful emotional imagery. Shining with inspiration. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/24/2018 1:29:00 PM
A new dawn comes with fresh hope and a warmer outlook on life, Freddie. Once again, your pen delivers! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/23/2018 4:46:00 PM
wow freddie...i've a book i'd like to write maybe you might review it : ) lol
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Date: 8/23/2018 4:05:00 PM
Beautifully written Freddie :)
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