Stafish Olor Poet Concrete

Dawn Chorus Contribution: Nrn 2021

…Here,
            as one 
               with 
                the air
            i am a
      stray blade 
of couch grass
      dancing  
        in the 
        wind..
           As
       Life is,
      so am I 
    TODAY..

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Robert James Liguori October 13, 2021 at 5:21 PM Isn't this a concrete poem? Looks like couch grass! Stafish Olor October 13, 2021 at 5:35 PM I just found something on google about concrete poems and you are right. Even says they can be paired with audio files which is perfect in this case. I appreciate you. Maybe I will practice writing in this style a bit more. Stafish Olor October 13, 2021 at 5:27 PM Thanks Robert. Is that what the form should be? I did try to shape it like couch grass. I will go read a little more about concrete poems. Thanks for the inspiration.

Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 5:15 PM what a beautiful little poem I love the way its been structured , many congrats on it being published - my son went to uni in Durham its a wonderful place and i would love to visit again one day!:-) hugs Jan xx Stafish Olor October 13, 2021 at 5:24 PM Thanks Jan! I appreciate the positive feedback. Durham is an English gem for sure. Well done to your son! I don’t blame you for wanting to go back there. After the lockdown everything seems so much more beautiful. Hugs Star xxxx