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Dawn Chorus Contribution: Nrn 2021

…Here, as one with the air i am a stray blade of couch grass dancing in the wind.. As Life is, so am I TODAY..

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Robert James Liguori

Date: 10/13/2021 5:21:00 PM

Isn't this a concrete poem? Looks like couch grass!

Stafish Olor
Date: 10/13/2021 5:35:00 PM

I just found something on google about concrete poems and you are right. Even says they can be paired with audio files which is perfect in this case. I appreciate you. Maybe I will practice writing in this style a bit more.

Stafish Olor
Date: 10/13/2021 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Robert. Is that what the form should be? I did try to shape it like couch grass. I will go read a little more about concrete poems. Thanks for the inspiration.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2021 5:15:00 PM

what a beautiful little poem I love the way its been structured , many congrats on it being published - my son went to uni in Durham its a wonderful place and i would love to visit again one day!:-) hugs Jan xx

Stafish Olor
Date: 10/13/2021 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan! I appreciate the positive feedback. Durham is an English gem for sure. Well done to your son! I don’t blame you for wanting to go back there. After the lockdown everything seems so much more beautiful. Hugs Star xxxx