Get Your Premium Membership

Dawn Awakes

Autumn's moon truly radiant and playful, In a stippled and midnight blue hues. Fragile is the troth with nature. Falling, trembling, withered leaves, Drift throughout gravel beneath; Dapple shadow cast across the ground in stillness. Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, Lays a gentle kiss, and it slowly fades. Stillness, a breath, the wakeful light of dawn awakes. 3/25/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/28/2022 10:24:00 AM
Great alliterative write! " Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, "
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2022 5:20:00 AM
Stillness awakes at the end. So beautiful. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/26/2022 9:28:00 AM
Ahhhh…Eve! You have beautifully and accurately described my seeing of Spring’s All re-awakening(esp w/my poor vision that makes the wilted leaves still hanging look like ornamental beads on all the high twigs. Your use of language is enviable! Hugs!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/25/2022 12:16:00 PM
Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, Such wonderful imagery and great thoughts throughout Eve. Well Done... Blessings
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things