Dawn Awakes

Autumn's moon truly radiant and playful, 
    In a stippled and midnight blue hues.

  Fragile is the troth with nature. 
    Falling, trembling, withered leaves, 
      Drift throughout gravel beneath; 
        Dapple shadow cast across the ground in stillness. 

  Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. 
    Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, 
      Lays a gentle kiss, and it slowly fades.

  Stillness, a breath, the wakeful light of dawn awakes.

3/25/2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Great alliterative write! " Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, "
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Stillness awakes at the end. So beautiful. Congratulations!
Eslinger Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Ahhhh…Eve! You have beautifully and accurately described my seeing of Spring’s All re-awakening(esp w/my poor vision that makes the wilted leaves still hanging look like ornamental beads on all the high twigs. Your use of language is enviable! Hugs!
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March 25, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Silence surge as nascent darkness draws. Snappish breeze, spring up slicing through darkness, Such wonderful imagery and great thoughts throughout Eve. Well Done... Blessings
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