Dawn Awakening

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The pond at Patterson Park, in Baltimore, Maryland. pond

Dawn Awakening Bosoms rise on pond's edge, dawn awakening beautiful. The sparkles in her eyes illuminating brighter, with each breath of a new day. More and more light now peaking in, looming along, caressing, slowly in foreplay. Warmth envelopes ever so naturally. Ripples of the pond defining. She lets the light in, erecting, as light uncorks, trees come to life, birds singing faster scattering, stretching the skies. And then climax. Day breaks. Dawn, her bosoms, splendor. connie pachecho 8/30/17

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