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Dawn and Twilight Glory

Dawn and Twilight Glory Dawn’s Neon Orange flames, Hot pink sizzles, Pierce scarlet hued skies Earth reflects morning fire. Twilight horizon burns Smolders in burnished Amber embers Flashing stars Thunder Moon 8-12-21 Contest: Merse – Nature’s Glory Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudbury

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2021 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A colorful write. Pretty colors, a great way to start the day out. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/4/2021 10:55:00 AM

Hi Paula! Thank you. Seeing the colors of dawn is like wrapping the day in a rainbow - so joyful! Sending you the blessings of a joy day! Have a great weekend my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2021 12:35:00 AM

A beautiful dawn is not always easy to put into words, Sam, but you have managed it with delightful colorful imagery. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul! For me dawn and sundown sizzle with energy and life! They are electric beauty - a gift for the day and a picture of joy to sleep on at night. It took me time to find the words to express that energy. Hope you are well! Blessings of joy to you!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2021 9:15:00 PM

My dear Rhyme Time friend, your vivid artistry captures the neon light of dawn's splendor and the flashing stars in Thunder Moon skies with the dazzling spill of your gifted pen. Dawn and Twilight Glory, indeed! Your exquisite imagery is brilliant, as is your poetic finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes sent to you over twilight's horizon.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2021 8:21:00 AM

Je vous en prie. Que la beauté du lever du soleil et la magnificence du coucher de soleil soient toujours les vôtres, mon ami inspirant xo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 12:42:00 PM

Dearest Rhyme Time friend, your messages are blessings that live in my heart, cherished. They are tresaured gems of uplifting encouragement - encouragement that blooms in times when the sunrise is hidden and twilight is blotted out by storms! Your poems have taught me much about imagery and the "finesse" of poetic expression. Meric pour tes felicitations et benedictions pour belle le soleil se leve et des couchers de soleil gracieux :)

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/31/2021 7:24:00 PM

Wow.... Twilight is my favourite time of the day and your beautiful poem says it all.... Congrats on your win Sam ....all the love :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 12:02:00 PM

Hi Carol! As you can tell I, too, love twilight. It is like evening gathering together all the loose ends of the day! Thank you for your congrations dear one! Sending you the blessings of the evening and much love wrapped inmy love! :D

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/31/2021 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations, Sam, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2021 4:46:00 PM

This was so much fun Mala! Thank you for the opportunity to explore a new form, for your sponsorship and your generous placement. It is an honor to be among these excellent winners! Blessings dear friend.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/15/2021 7:11:00 PM

I like how you show the beauty of dawn and sunset all in one poem! Great write!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer. For me sunrise and sunset are a complete package holding the day together! I am so glad you enjoyed this vision of the day. If you are close to the ocean here in California, we get to experience the "neon" beauty on a daily basis provided the fog stays out of the scene! Blessings of beauty in sunrise-sunsets to you!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/14/2021 8:35:00 PM

We have had a lot of hot days (and nights) but now the weather is finally settling down, this is so artful and vivid, best wishes for the contest!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:50:00 AM

You have had a very HOT summer for the northwest Michelle. I remember reveling in long, warm summer twilights - always balanced out by the early onset of cold winter nights! - getting dark early! Thank you so much for your delight words of compliment and best wishes. Smiles and a blessing or two for you! :D

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/14/2021 6:48:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:46:00 AM

Gina thank you! You always make my day with your graciousness - must be a reflection of that southern hospitality! Sending you bright blessings of dawn and peace at sunset. Hugs and a prayer!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/14/2021 2:14:00 AM

Amazing use of the metaphor of fire to create a beautiful picture of dawn and twilight, Sam:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:43:00 AM

Hi Jo! Many thank you's being sent your way for your lovely message! I am so appreciative of your uplifting notes and recognition of the metaphor! Always put a smile into my day. Sending you blessings for your day!