Dawn

So disenchanted with spring equinox 

my clock has to change again 

will someone tell the birds.




composed 29/03/2017.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2017 8:12:00 PM

A wonderful write Roy. So eloquently stated and your last line is amazing. Well done my friend!

Roy Pett
Date: 11/14/2017 3:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan for your very kind comment, there must be a good reason for changing the time in spring and autumn but I'm not sure why, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

John Michaels

Date: 4/9/2017 7:04:00 AM

Excellent! So true - love the last line especially! Well done!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/9/2017 8:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comment John, much appreciated, Roy.:))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 3:12:00 PM

are you the one that wrote the other poem against daylight saving time? Love how you did this, especially the last line!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/3/2017 4:16:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, no I didn't write a poem against daylight, ( I have just checked it was Trevor McLeod ) thanks again for your very kind comment and support much appreciated, Roy. :))