Dawn

So disenchanted with spring equinox my clock has to change again will someone tell the birds. composed 29/03/2017.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2017 8:12:00 PM

A wonderful write Roy. So eloquently stated and your last line is amazing. Well done my friend!

Roy Pett
Date: 11/14/2017 3:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan for your very kind comment, there must be a good reason for changing the time in spring and autumn but I'm not sure why, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

John Michaels

Date: 4/9/2017 7:04:00 AM

Excellent! So true - love the last line especially! Well done!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/9/2017 8:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comment John, much appreciated, Roy.:))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 3:12:00 PM

are you the one that wrote the other poem against daylight saving time? Love how you did this, especially the last line!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/3/2017 4:16:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, no I didn't write a poem against daylight, ( I have just checked it was Trevor McLeod ) thanks again for your very kind comment and support much appreciated, Roy. :))

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2017 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine win, Roy! I agree with you, change of time does not always effect us positively! // paul

Roy Pett
Date: 4/1/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul, so pleased I'm not the only one still can't understand the reason or benefits, thanks again, Roy. :))

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/30/2017 7:03:00 AM

Nice one, Roy. I completely agree, the changing back and forth is annoying - just let's pick a time already and stay with it.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/30/2017 7:18:00 AM

Thank you very much Agnes, so pleased you agree and find it as annoying as I do, thanks again, Roy. :))

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/29/2017 9:56:00 AM

A true experience brought out beautifully ...

Roy Pett
Date: 3/29/2017 10:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Probir for your support much appreciated, Roy, :))

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/29/2017 8:53:00 AM

Enjoyed!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/29/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment, so pleased you enjoyed this, Roy, :))

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/29/2017 7:35:00 AM

Good one Roy, clever and true.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/29/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Phil, love the morning chorus but hate the clocks going back and forth every year, thanks again for your visit, Roy. :))