Home » Poems » David Mohn » Dawn

David Mohn - Premium Member

Dawn

a dream becomes a musical – chorus of robins

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2016

dreammorningmonoku

♡Like0

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1

December 28, 2019 at 7:26 PM

Congratulations! Well done.

Kavyaarasi Muneesvaran

December 27, 2019 at 10:58 PM

Congratulations. Excellent writing.

December 27, 2019 at 10:13 PM

Beautiful! Congrats!

Charles Messina

December 27, 2019 at 4:08 PM

Very nice, David. Congratulations on your 1st place win!

December 27, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Glorious imagery David, beautifully done. Congrats on your well deserved top win. With kindest thoughts Ann

December 27, 2019 at 3:26 PM

Beautiful penning, David! Congrats on your #1 top finish in the contest! Season's best, Gershon

December 27, 2019 at 1:57 PM

Lovely, David. Love it. Congrats on your top win.

December 27, 2019 at 1:52 PM

David, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2019 at 1:16 PM

How beautiful, David. Congrats

Kai Michael Neumann

December 27, 2019 at 12:41 PM

Sounds good. Wonderful. Kind wishes, Kai

Krish Radhakrishna

December 27, 2019 at 10:57 AM

Wonderful!! A chorus of Robins!!

December 27, 2019 at 10:39 AM

So sweet (tweet) Congratulations!

December 27, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Beautiful imagery... I loved this one liner.. Congrats on your first place in the contest..

January 2, 2018 at 2:24 PM

Congrats on your win, David.

December 28, 2017 at 4:22 AM

Lovely ... Congratulations on your nice win ...

December 27, 2017 at 8:31 PM

beautiful, David, congratulations on your win! hugs eve

Kai Michael Neumann

December 27, 2017 at 2:16 AM

Just looked at the robins in the garden. They sang with the frogs. Congratulations...

December 27, 2017 at 12:19 AM

David, a beautiful dream this is.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:05 PM

This is gorgeous! I love it! Congratulations on your win, a fave for me :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:26 PM

FANTASTIC. I just love your short poems, David. I hope your Christmas was merry.

December 26, 2017 at 6:10 PM

Love your monoku David! Congratulations on your top win!!

December 26, 2017 at 6:04 PM

Such a beautifully expressive write David. Congratulations for your top placement with your outstanding poem. ~Susan

December 26, 2017 at 5:04 PM

This is delightful, David! What lovely music to wake up to! ~ Congratulations on this podium finish. Regards // paul

December 26, 2017 at 3:54 PM

Lovely, David! Congrats. Janice

December 26, 2017 at 2:51 PM

Well done David, congratulations...

1

Get a Premium Membership

Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.

Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace