Dawn

Deep within my loins I had to shoot out more than one extra poem So I did it Dirty little me A woman sewing her seed I did that second poem indeed Screw the establishment I am the dawn of new poetry

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2017 8:39:00 AM

I had missed this expressive poem, Aurore! Different from the usual ones, but lovely to feel the inner strength which you possess! ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2016 11:23:00 AM

That's quite the poem, Aurore. I found it intriguing, to say the least. Great write.

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:47:00 PM

Thank you, I was feeling feminist at that moment, even I am not really like that! xoxoxoxox

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2016 5:22:00 PM

HA!! this was different and I much enjoyed it!

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:58:00 PM

yes!! Even I was shocked at my creative juices! xoxoxoxox peace and love

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2016 12:50:00 AM

And a bold iconoclast you are! This is brilliant Aurore! #7 ; )

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:57:00 PM

You are so sweet connie, xoxoxoxoxox

Lewis Raynes

Date: 5/5/2016 11:34:00 PM

Loud words are words to be heard, i like this write Aurore, a7

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:56:00 PM

thanks Lewis, peace and love xoxoxoxoxox

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2016 2:13:00 AM

Only ONE extra poem Aurore - shame on you lol - some constantly shoot out ten a day but they get few reads which is a shame as there may be gems that are missed but I do get off seeing such volume:-) hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:52:00 PM

Being a lady, I prefer to show my talents only here and there, and sometimes in the lair xoxoxoxxox huggers

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/24/2016 11:48:00 PM

Being a lady, I prefer to show my talents only here and there, and sometimes in the lair xoxoxoxxox huggers