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Dawn

Trying to hold our love together 'Seems I'm doing all the talking She only stares and listens Is she thinking about walking 'Been three long hours since midnight And we're still so far apart Oh I wonder which will break first Dawn...or my heart I watch her gaze fall away To her bags on the hallway floor Her eyes make their way past memories To our bedroom door Is it staying or leaving fears What are those tears for Oh I wonder which will break first Dawn...or my heart Dawn means everything to me She's all that ever matters Starts my day with sunshine Makes the nights so much better Now I'm begging her ......please Don't leave me in the dark Oh, I wonder which will break first Dawn...or my heart PROTECTED BY COPYRIGHT LAW

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:23:00 PM
A sad and beautifully expressed write Chuck. Enjoyed!
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Date: 8/6/2014 7:55:00 PM
Hi Chuck, Congratulations!!! :) On being one of the featured poets this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/5/2014 5:51:00 PM
This is Crackin'... Huge congrats on this fine write and on your poem being featured this week!!!!
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Date: 8/5/2014 4:47:00 PM
Hey Chuck, congrats on your poem being featured this week....and do hold on to your heart...there is a lot of love waiting for you..if you can let go......Neva
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:58:00 AM
This is a great lyric Chuck.......Tim
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/15/2014 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Tim Appreciate your visit, my best. chuck
Date: 5/10/2014 4:17:00 PM
- Very well written .... but, sad Chuck! - Wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/11/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise! Your encouragement means a lot! Chuck

Book: Shattered Sighs