Dawn

bird song fills the air
  and wood nymph bathes in dew drops -
  shy sparrow blushes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:05 PM
this one is SO CLEVER. with the sparrow blushing at the end. Love it.
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:25 PM
I can't always get up early enough to witness these kinds of things.
Jackson Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:00 AM
I like to get up early, but I do get insomnia quite a lot, Best wishes Linda x
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 7:42 AM
I like this one..Very creative work..I can see the scene..Except that I have never seen a wood nymph..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Ink-U-Script Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:42 PM
I absolutely love the imagery here...Beautiful!!!! :)
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